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6/28/23, 2:37 PM
Great story! Love the slow and clueless transformation of Sugartits and Cocksucker. Just the transformation of Gary at the end felt a bit more rushed and too easy relative to the other two, though I could also understand that it might become too long and a little repetitive to go through it all again at the end of the story. I hope you will continue this storyline along for more...I'd be curious to see what becomes of the bar 'under new management' and how Sir's might further exert his control on more college kids around.

Swizz
6/28/23, 4:01 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Thanks!! Yeah, the only real point of Gary's arrival is to give an outside perspective on the main characters' transformations. I thought seeing the two guys proudly introduce themselves with their new "names" would be kinda hot. And as you say, drawing out another transformation would probably be a little repetitive. Glad you liked the story!
6/27/23, 1:37 AM
That Gabe still give me a bad vibe. He used "rapist" as an excuse for his enslavement of Jake, and his fellows at Syndicate called Jake all kinds of name because of that. But who was talking here? Human-traffickers. Were all the guys kidnapped and sold being rapists or criminals in some kind? If not, this Gabe is so fake. He used "I'm saving you" as a way to bound and manipulate Matt, and now Jake's bound with Matt and "Matt's saving you" were used to bound and manipulate Jake. So my feeling of him as an exploiter is still true, in a bad kind of way. This Gabe does look like another "alpha" deserving his own "downfall", like Jake, doesn't he? Him kidnapping people left and right, then takes on the wrong person... For Jake and Matt, I feel like Jake's feeling for Matt was a case of Stockholm Syndrome and it's being used to warp his mind. Though I think he was in good hands and Matt would use him but not mistreat and abuse him (much), like those customers the Syndicate dealing with would potentially be (heavy modification, amputation, going-wrong breath-play...); and I'm kind of happy for that.

6/27/23, 9:31 AM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) I getcha! Master Gabe is despicable, but that’s the point. Slavers are evil and for the most part unliveable bastards, yet I’ve always been attracted to guys like that. You may hate Gabe, but you hve to respect him

6/27/23, 11:52 AM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) I don't know about that. I find it's hard for me to respect a gaslighter like Gabe, "I'm doing you a favor, it's for your own good" while it's not at all. I have experienced enough bullshit like that, I would like no more. Due to circumstance, I may need to put up with it but by no mean would appreciate it or respect the person doing it. But each person has their own criterias, I suppose.

Martin
6/27/23, 4:01 PM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) The characters might be assholes. Nothing in the story condones what's happening. In fact, it's so over the top what Gabe is doing, that I could accept this as a totally unrealistic fantasy - otherwise, it wouldn't be admissible to this site, as realistic rape stories are not allowed. As the story is told from Jake's point of view, letting us in on his humiliation and slow conversion, this story becomes sexually attractive to me personally. As I'm not a sadist, I couldn't enjoy it if it were told from the pov of Gabe for example - but I don't do kink-shamming, to each his own. For me, there is no point in overanalyzing this story. It's a fantasy, nothing more. In stories, you have villains, victims, and heroes. There is no point in trying to blame the characters. Whether Jake is falling victim to Stockholm syndrome is of no consequence to me - I don't judge him, as he's just a fictional character. I can hate Gabe, I can feel conflicted about Matt and I can feel both sorry and a little bit envious of Jake. I don't have to respect any of these persons, though, I respect the author, who has created an amazing piece of erotic fiction.

6/27/23, 4:23 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you so much, mate. So glad you enjoyed. Was so much fun to create this fantasy!

Anonymous
6/28/23, 4:09 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I couldn't have said it better myself. Totally agree with all your points here, mate! I DID brought up the point about Billy a chapter or two ago as well but then came into this conclusion that you so eloquently put. ;)

6/28/23, 5:14 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) My comments were to talk about the characters. To me, they are one of the elements presented in a story along with the plot, the writing, etc.; if we don't talk about those, then what are there to talk about in a comment, outside of a single line "I like/don't like it"? Obviously not the author, since I don't know him so I can't judge.

Martin
6/28/23, 5:47 AM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) Well, that's perfectly ok, of course, but to me, it sounded a bit like you were mad at the author for creating flawed and unlikeable characters. What I meant by "overanalyzing" the story is that we all understand that these characters are flawed and even unrealistic to the core. Of course, Gabe is worse than Jake ever was and his "justification" is completely nuts. Of course, Matt's being enslaved himself doesn't excuse him for doing the same to Jake. But in the end that doesn't matter to me. This wicked story in itself is simply a hot and fantastic read. Maybe I got your comment the wrong way, but I got the impression that you were unhappy with the story because of the bad things that happened there.

6/28/23, 3:55 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) It's true that I were unhappy with the story; characters like Gabe troubled me and kind of stopped me from enjoying it. However, it's about the characters, not about the author; just as while I despise Lex Luthor, I'm not mad at his creators who are also creators of Superman. And it's my personal taste. On the other hand, it's seem like the comments was steered more toward me and less toward the story. I think it's better stop here.
6/28/23, 3:21 PM
Need more
6/28/23, 3:10 PM
Thank you for such wonderful comments.
6/28/23, 2:42 PM
Love the sequel. I can already see a third one with someone being stuck in a huge baby’s thick, loaded diaper :thinking:
benedick543
6/28/23, 1:43 PM
This was such a hot story! Something I'd go back to in the future for sure. I can't wait for the contest to be over so I'd know the author and read more of your works! Just a little nitpick though, I think you might've changed some of the names midway through writing, but maybe you overlooked some remnants of the old names that resulted in some inconsistencies. Clarence is sometimes called Chester, and Caleb (Brad's bf) was initially introduced as Matty. This didn't really take away from the story, though, but I thought you should know. Thanks for this story!

6/28/23, 2:32 PM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) And I ooooop. I def changed the names halfway through and likely missed a couple! I’ll have to edit it when I get the chance! Thanks for your kind words regardless!!
Trotskisaurus
6/28/23, 1:35 PM
Perfect! Please write either a sequel or more like this :)
6/28/23, 4:47 AM
Crazy!!!! You coulda given me a million guesses and I'd never have seen this coming. I'm so impressed by your ability to always keep this fresh and come up with fun new variations. I can tell the parties just getting started and I suspect no one is going to have quite the evening they suspected. :P Can't wait to see what happens next.

6/28/23, 1:09 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANKS, Fanboi!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: GR8 2 hear from you & that you enjoyed this latest chapter!! ALWAYS Grateful 4 your positive comments ...working on curveballs 4 the next chapter--:exploding_head: The PARTY's only JUST begun!!:sparkler:
6/28/23, 12:32 PM
This has been a great series so far, can't wait to see what happens next. Fantastic work.
6/28/23, 12:00 PM
Liam is turning out to be a Daddy. A hot corrupted Daddy. I wonder what would be the last item Ryan would turn into.