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CHT
6/27/23, 11:57 PM
Just thinking, with the old feud between Emimem and MGK it might be interesting if Fox enlists him to humiliate the boys. Some male of make spanking might put them in their place lol
Bas_w123
6/27/23, 10:26 PM
Ticked so many boxes for me. Helpless watching his friend succumb. Resisting. Spiral and audio reinforcement. Very hot
Sem
6/27/23, 3:42 PM
I want next chapter!
Anonymous
6/26/23, 1:01 AM
This have be a WHILE NEW PERSPECTIVE of Sammy. And I have just one thing for him: RESPECT. He knows what he got, HOW to use it BUT RESPONSIBLY using it. "With great power comes great responsibility" and Mr. Parker is owning that responsibility. Salud! I am LOVING this twist!

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon, that's exactly what I was going for.
6/27/23, 2:39 PM
You are such a good writer!! What is the read oder for your works to understand the bigger universe you are making?

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@[That one Guy you know](/user/show/10001793) Parker Brothers which includes Adventures and John's tale, Top Dawg and then Foul Ball to get the whole thing. Characters show up in Buck Stop Here but the story isn't needed to understand Eden.
CHT
6/25/23, 10:48 PM
Such a hot story .... hoping to see Pete and MGK humiliated and forced to do stuff together by Fox! great writing!

Anonymous
6/26/23, 8:14 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Thanks man, glad you’re enjoying it. If you got any suggestions or things you wanna see added lmk

6/27/23, 12:52 PM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) totally agree
6/27/23, 12:47 PM
I echo the other comment, they really do make a great couple. Cute and hot at the same time. Simon is igniting the flame of Mike and im so here for it. Love that Mike is also considerate of Simon. And that Simons transformation is not obscene and that the body counter act and balance it out in some other way. Cant wait to read more.
6/27/23, 12:28 PM
Great story !!
6/26/23, 4:40 PM
Very hot story!!! Did Dean becomes a God of sex at the end? If so, Loki might have been better at lying than most expected! Or maybe it ended up much better than he expected. Just a tiny problem, the switch between POVs are a bit jarring.

6/27/23, 6:03 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks! Dean didn't become a sex god, at least not in a literal sense. However, he's also not fully out of the prayer's sway; he's still only had sex with 50% of the gods present after all. I did worry about the floating perspective, but I felt it was important to really get into everyones minds and show how they were being influenced. I hoped the third person omniscient narration and paragraph breaks would mellow out the oddness.