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Anonymous
6/26/23, 1:01 AM
This have be a WHILE NEW PERSPECTIVE of Sammy. And I have just one thing for him: RESPECT. He knows what he got, HOW to use it BUT RESPONSIBLY using it. "With great power comes great responsibility" and Mr. Parker is owning that responsibility. Salud! I am LOVING this twist!

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon, that's exactly what I was going for.
6/27/23, 2:39 PM
You are such a good writer!! What is the read oder for your works to understand the bigger universe you are making?

6/27/23, 2:42 PM
@[That one Guy you know](/user/show/10001793) Parker Brothers which includes Adventures and John's tale, Top Dawg and then Foul Ball to get the whole thing. Characters show up in Buck Stop Here but the story isn't needed to understand Eden.
CHT
6/25/23, 10:48 PM
Such a hot story .... hoping to see Pete and MGK humiliated and forced to do stuff together by Fox! great writing!

Anonymous
6/26/23, 8:14 AM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) Thanks man, glad you’re enjoying it. If you got any suggestions or things you wanna see added lmk

6/27/23, 12:52 PM
@[CHT](/user/show/10025789) totally agree
6/27/23, 12:47 PM
I echo the other comment, they really do make a great couple. Cute and hot at the same time. Simon is igniting the flame of Mike and im so here for it. Love that Mike is also considerate of Simon. And that Simons transformation is not obscene and that the body counter act and balance it out in some other way. Cant wait to read more.
6/27/23, 12:28 PM
Great story !!
6/26/23, 4:40 PM
Very hot story!!! Did Dean becomes a God of sex at the end? If so, Loki might have been better at lying than most expected! Or maybe it ended up much better than he expected. Just a tiny problem, the switch between POVs are a bit jarring.

6/27/23, 6:03 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks! Dean didn't become a sex god, at least not in a literal sense. However, he's also not fully out of the prayer's sway; he's still only had sex with 50% of the gods present after all. I did worry about the floating perspective, but I felt it was important to really get into everyones minds and show how they were being influenced. I hoped the third person omniscient narration and paragraph breaks would mellow out the oddness.
6/27/23, 5:58 AM
The sadism and abuse scenes were a turn-off for me, but otherwise, this story was hot as fuck. I especially liked the way that the Henderson men started rationalizing Clarence's main suggestion that they were all gay and into incest, dealing with the cognitive dissonance of the fact that they'd never slept with a man before.
Theorizer
6/27/23, 5:35 AM
Heya it’s me and back with another theory that of Jamie and his possible future pup nature So like from chapter 4 and 5 we see that Jamie became a sort of mini pup drone because master wanted to play with him, but even after the mask was taken away, Jamie still was acting like a lil pet this puppy nature is fascinating because altheorizingly I think that it means Jamie soaked up much more from chapter 3, where the subliminal soaked into him as a primer for Master’s corruption/instruction. So I think Jamie for now on will ehibit some pup characteristics This also is kind of a tangent but the symbiote interacted and merged with Jamie while in pup mode, and jamie liked being a pup and being caressed and loved by Master and 005 midnight or Dusk; so, maybe jamie accepts his pup realignment on top of the superdrone one My prediction is that 013-to-be, can be placated by belly rubs, head scratching, hugs, sleeping together, and these are all ways master and his drones can use to convince Jamie to become a drone as part of the latex family. And who knows maybe he will puppy play date with Jack who is a “authentic” puppy drone
Wide Wobbles
6/27/23, 5:26 AM
Looking forward to reading more of these! Would love to see the Commander and Doctor start fattening up as well and helping the cadets along. Seeing a variety of weight will be neat too, with muscle-gut at the skinniest and maybe even getting some superchubs eventually. I think Connor would be the greatest contrast from enthusiastic military cadet to fanatic gainer gamer slob. Maybe there'll be a change in uniform to fit the fattening as well, who knows? Keep up the great work