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6/26/23, 4:40 PM
Very hot story!!! Did Dean becomes a God of sex at the end? If so, Loki might have been better at lying than most expected! Or maybe it ended up much better than he expected. Just a tiny problem, the switch between POVs are a bit jarring.

6/27/23, 6:03 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks! Dean didn't become a sex god, at least not in a literal sense. However, he's also not fully out of the prayer's sway; he's still only had sex with 50% of the gods present after all. I did worry about the floating perspective, but I felt it was important to really get into everyones minds and show how they were being influenced. I hoped the third person omniscient narration and paragraph breaks would mellow out the oddness.
6/27/23, 5:58 AM
The sadism and abuse scenes were a turn-off for me, but otherwise, this story was hot as fuck. I especially liked the way that the Henderson men started rationalizing Clarence's main suggestion that they were all gay and into incest, dealing with the cognitive dissonance of the fact that they'd never slept with a man before.
Theorizer
6/27/23, 5:35 AM
Heya it’s me and back with another theory that of Jamie and his possible future pup nature So like from chapter 4 and 5 we see that Jamie became a sort of mini pup drone because master wanted to play with him, but even after the mask was taken away, Jamie still was acting like a lil pet this puppy nature is fascinating because altheorizingly I think that it means Jamie soaked up much more from chapter 3, where the subliminal soaked into him as a primer for Master’s corruption/instruction. So I think Jamie for now on will ehibit some pup characteristics This also is kind of a tangent but the symbiote interacted and merged with Jamie while in pup mode, and jamie liked being a pup and being caressed and loved by Master and 005 midnight or Dusk; so, maybe jamie accepts his pup realignment on top of the superdrone one My prediction is that 013-to-be, can be placated by belly rubs, head scratching, hugs, sleeping together, and these are all ways master and his drones can use to convince Jamie to become a drone as part of the latex family. And who knows maybe he will puppy play date with Jack who is a “authentic” puppy drone
Wide Wobbles
6/27/23, 5:26 AM
Looking forward to reading more of these! Would love to see the Commander and Doctor start fattening up as well and helping the cadets along. Seeing a variety of weight will be neat too, with muscle-gut at the skinniest and maybe even getting some superchubs eventually. I think Connor would be the greatest contrast from enthusiastic military cadet to fanatic gainer gamer slob. Maybe there'll be a change in uniform to fit the fattening as well, who knows? Keep up the great work
Swizz
6/27/23, 3:27 AM
Nice! I enjoy the effortlessness and immediacy of Clarence's power. I feel like there's tons of potential with this character. I'd be interested to see a younger Clarence discovering and exploring his powers for the first time!
6/27/23, 3:15 AM
The way he uses hypnotism to enhance the experience is really quite beautiful. This is a fantastic erotic piece.
6/27/23, 12:04 AM
I’m super excited to see how this turns out!

6/27/23, 2:48 AM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) Im hoping to post every week, thanks for your support!
6/26/23, 11:29 PM
I'm hoping Will and Connor hook up as lovers as bears and/or gainers.

6/27/23, 2:46 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Mayhaps :eye: :eye:
6/26/23, 7:59 PM
Mmmm, mmmmm! I love a good weight gain story, and this is a perfect set-up. You do an excellent job describing each man’s physicality, which will in turn make their inevitable changes all the sweeter. ;p Some nice things to see: -Increased laziness and sloth as the guys plump up -Retaining a healthy layer of muscle under the fat -At least one guy getting super into the gaining while another guy tries to stave it off -Love some belt/button popping! -As CutlerFan said, rounding out (big pecs and asses) to balance the bellies is nice But whatever you come up with will be awesome! :)

6/27/23, 2:44 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thaaanks, some laziness in a wg story is always a plus in my book. I have the story finished already but some suggestions can be added along the way! so thanks for the input and for more fun this Friday!