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6/26/23, 9:07 PM
This is a super hot story! Okay, so I'm a sucker for 'happy endings' in which dudes hypnotized come out better at the end then they did at the start, so I hope that if they do give into pleasure its safe pleasure. Maybe online in videos. Or something. So while I admit that I am not so much a fan of someone intelligent and thinking focused turning mindless, I do like how he trusts Kevin to think and guide him, that was hot. The three wanting Kevin to feel good AND for their brothers to feel good too is hot. I really hope Kevin remains dominant, them becoming his good boys. I also hope he tops them, doesn't become some bottom boy for the brothers. (POV top controller is so rare it seems so seeing him in charge is hot!). Maybe there can be some interesting need for buttplay, let Kevin rub, finger, rim their asses in prep for fucking them. Anyway, all that said, good story. Hot story. Fun story. Well written story. Thanks for uploading it, its very sexy.
4/28/22, 11:51 PM
Such a shame this never continued.

6/24/23, 3:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I do need to begin this again. Yes

BeastBoy42
6/26/23, 8:12 PM
@[Horologio](/user/show/939806) Hey! I tried to email you but it said email invalid, id very VERY much want to chat if you are interested. Your story is AMAZING and hits on so many of my own, special interests ;)Ive worked on a number of stories with similar themes and loved to exchange ideas
6/26/23, 7:32 PM
Your descriptions were absolutely fantastic! I love that both of them submitted into lust yet weren't corrupted by it (i.e. Mike asking for consent) The idea is very interesting and I can't wait to the next (and hopefully smutty) chapter!
6/26/23, 4:46 PM
A great start! I hope they get big solid bellies or roidguts. Huge pecs and/or glutes to balance the bellies would be super. The bigger they get the stronger and tougher they get. Just a few thoughts.

6/26/23, 6:06 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks! Im thinking about describing each ones changes and show some weight variety. Also all the ideas are well received, lets see how they end up 😜
6/26/23, 12:25 PM
Great story! It's not often we see a story written from the perspective of a bad guy (or the bad guy), yet it is a very interesting idea and you executed it well. It was super hot and written very well, taking time to write a good exposition without taking to long to get to the smutty part. I wanted to write that breaking up with someone via a note is harsh, but it actually fits his character well and I wouldn't be surprised if he would've done so anyway.

The Author (REDACTED)
6/26/23, 3:02 PM
Thank you for thr comment! Actually in an earlier plan Gavin wasn't so much of a jerk, but I just liked it a bit better this way. An extra bit of revenge by having a jackass helplessly debasing himself. And a note is maybe a bit harsh, but thinking about it, it's possible that a lot of Stacey's ex-boyfriends have left notes. After some gentle suggestions from a concerned brother. So she may be used to it. (Maybe still harsh.)

6/26/23, 4:35 PM
@The Author (REDACTED) _(strikethrough text here)_ Don't get me wrong, it's a nice touch and it fits the story. On the one hand, it's strange that as her brother Simon would command this method for breakups, but on the other it makes the ex look like much more of an asshole, which will help to drive up the point. I can kinda see it as Simon's way to make sure he's still the is the one she would go to, since he will always be there to support her when her mean bfs will break up with her seemingly out of the blue. I also guessed that maybe he wants to make sure they do it and that his thrall over them is not broken before they break up with her.
6/26/23, 11:56 AM
Amazing start, I can’t wait for more.

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Thanks for your support!
6/25/23, 5:38 AM
This is my second time reading this and if anything, it only got hotter on the re-read. I love this universe already and I can't wait to read more in it. I have to admit that, like other readers, it would be really hot to read through Patrick experiencing those changes and being molded, along with some of the aftermath. I'll be looking forward to more stories in this universe!

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thank you so much! Getting better on a reread is a real compliment. I think you'll be very interested in some of the other main stories in this umbrella. I have other upcoming stories that deal with bio printing, AI, artificial reality, and nanotechnology.
6/24/23, 11:20 PM
I definitely want to hear more about what happens to Patrick. You've created a very compelling future world here.

6/26/23, 3:25 PM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Thank you! I hope you will also enjoy the other stories in the Fracture series as they will all contribute to illustrating my take on this sort of Westworld/blade runner future, just with a very gay twist.
6/26/23, 11:23 AM
What a great story, well done! I do love these kinds of story where men are commanded by and at the complete mercy of someone with mind control powers. Hopefully, we'll get to see more of Simon's antics!

The Author (Name hidden)
6/26/23, 2:54 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you for reading! Good to hear you liked the concept. (Though I'm not sure how much mercy Simon really has for the men under his sway.)
6/26/23, 7:06 AM
That was evil! I was so close to coming, and then no joi! very well written, and I love the concept!

6/26/23, 2:47 PM
@[dumbmusclehypnojockboy](/user/show/911192) lol I know, I know, I had to use the first chapter as set up. But don't worry plenty of fun to be had. :P Hope you enjoy the second chapter, promise it has plenty of smut.