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6/26/23, 11:56 AM
Amazing start, I can’t wait for more.

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Thanks for your support!
6/25/23, 5:38 AM
This is my second time reading this and if anything, it only got hotter on the re-read. I love this universe already and I can't wait to read more in it. I have to admit that, like other readers, it would be really hot to read through Patrick experiencing those changes and being molded, along with some of the aftermath. I'll be looking forward to more stories in this universe!

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thank you so much! Getting better on a reread is a real compliment. I think you'll be very interested in some of the other main stories in this umbrella. I have other upcoming stories that deal with bio printing, AI, artificial reality, and nanotechnology.
6/24/23, 11:20 PM
I definitely want to hear more about what happens to Patrick. You've created a very compelling future world here.

6/26/23, 3:25 PM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Thank you! I hope you will also enjoy the other stories in the Fracture series as they will all contribute to illustrating my take on this sort of Westworld/blade runner future, just with a very gay twist.
6/26/23, 11:23 AM
What a great story, well done! I do love these kinds of story where men are commanded by and at the complete mercy of someone with mind control powers. Hopefully, we'll get to see more of Simon's antics!

The Author (Name hidden)
6/26/23, 2:54 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you for reading! Good to hear you liked the concept. (Though I'm not sure how much mercy Simon really has for the men under his sway.)
6/26/23, 7:06 AM
That was evil! I was so close to coming, and then no joi! very well written, and I love the concept!

6/26/23, 2:47 PM
@[dumbmusclehypnojockboy](/user/show/911192) lol I know, I know, I had to use the first chapter as set up. But don't worry plenty of fun to be had. :P Hope you enjoy the second chapter, promise it has plenty of smut.
6/25/23, 6:22 PM
This was hot! I want to be Simon and have such powers. Also yay on rimming, too bad it wasnt Simons pov as he rimmed and fucked. Also I think Simon will tell Gavin to call back and have him become a good boy. Good story! Very hot!

The Author (but anonymous)
6/26/23, 12:48 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed, even if it was from the view of the straight guy learning to love his new role, rather than from the gay man teaching him. And I do believe you're right about what Gavin's future holds for him, yes.

6/26/23, 6:37 AM
@The Author (but anonymous) This is really hot. Is this going to be a one-chapter thing or you'll add more? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

The Author (anonymously)
6/26/23, 2:46 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Thanks! As for more, well, the story I did come up with as a one-shot, but I did find it a lot of fun to write, so I may see if I can think of some more scenarios for Simon before the competition's end. (Or after if it rakes a while)
6/26/23, 2:27 PM
Intrigued to see where this is going ! Continue On ! Get Creative ! But Not Sci-Fi !
6/26/23, 1:11 PM
Please tell me that somewhere down the line we bring Mike to Simon’s reality and the essence drinking is reversed so our research nerd can play with his neighbor like this…
6/26/23, 12:56 PM
Oh wow, this is hot and very interesting concept. Cant wait ti read more of it. Theres so many potential changes and or experiment he could do to Simon.
6/26/23, 12:33 PM
Hot. Hope more is to come