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6/26/23, 12:33 PM
Hot. Hope more is to come
Anonymous
6/26/23, 12:32 PM
Fuck, love this!! Only wish the corruption was a bit slower and more of a tease ;) Great stuff
6/26/23, 12:28 PM
Please write more. Enjoying it a lot.
6/26/23, 12:10 PM
Such a hot concept. I hope you keep going.
Sam
6/26/23, 11:29 AM
I love this already pecs and nipples stories are the best
6/26/23, 8:25 AM
I really really like Simon as a character! I'm excited to see where this goes!
6/26/23, 8:04 AM
Great chapter, Cody finally dominated and ready to be used as a sexy cowboy boytoy he truly is. Two things intrigue me for the next chapters, though: First is Justin's position. Barely started and already tinkering with the mind control work that Dexter created. Even if it is not overlapping, yet, any orders or commands that the friend implemented in Chad, this is already worrying and potential conflicts could arise from this. After all, we don't know of any potential interests Justin has. Initially it may just be to humiliate Chad, but this could just be the beginning of an even bigger plot. Then there's the issue of Rich/potential slaves. It's more of a concern than a criticism. In the vast majority, if not all harem stories, the tendency is to have more quantity than memory of the protagonist's slaves. And right now, I think Rich illustrates that more than anything else: How relevant is he going to be when he's taken over by Dexter? We'll get to know who is the person behind the rich, handsome, intelligent and hard-working athlete, to the point of wanting to be the first in everything and who, because he was surpassed by his dumbest friend, ended up under the control of a nerd with a "god complex"? I mean, Rich isn't hot like Cody or intimidating like Chad or idle like Brad (and for that, he was transformed into a butler/bodyguard). If only Rich's father was a super hot millionaire daddy, then things would change a bit, because the young man would certainly serve as a bridge to make Dexter have the richest man in town under his power. And it would open doors for other daddies to get on our psycho poindexter's radar, like the aforementioned Papa Bauer (so many comments asking for it!). The fact that Rich is smarter than his other friends could also be useful for potential counseling. Despite my personal wishes, I also think this story makes more sense of having more young slaves than middle-aged ones. I love daddies, but these don't seem like Dexter's jam, at least from what we've seen so far. Not to mention that there are many types of young people in the world. The name of the series is "Master of the Jocks" after all. There must be other types of hot young athletes ready to be aligned to the protagonist's sexual needs.
Anonymous
6/26/23, 5:34 AM
Pretty good! Though as a rubber enthusiast, I'm more looking forward to the sequel, _Freddy Fuckmehard and the Chamber of Latex_ :wink:
6/26/23, 5:01 AM
I fucking love this and would be thrilled to read a sequel (even though I can have plenty of fun imagining what happens next on my own). Like others have said, that complete disregard for the victims, their helplessness as their most basic selves are casually rewritten through no fault of their own — that's my jam. Thank you for writing this!
6/26/23, 12:21 AM
This is such exceptional work. The effort you put in to fleshing out your characters shines through and it really transcends smut and is elevated to literature.

6/26/23, 3:34 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for your positive feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.