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6/25/23, 3:45 AM
Oh okay, now i got it, the price of the label wish is his age. Nice, i wonder whats gonna happen next, especially his relationship history with Mason as he gets older.

6/25/23, 4:04 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Yeah that's all in good time. There's at least two more chapters ahead.
6/24/23, 10:49 PM
I keep coming back and re-reading this story, love it, thank you.

6/25/23, 1:51 AM
@[stephenhh](/user/show/1131578) Well, no! Thank you, actually! :p
6/25/23, 12:47 AM
Oh my God, this is fucking brilliant!! You need to make all seven books. Amazing idea and execution!
6/25/23, 12:35 AM
Hope exams went well but very glad you continued!
6/25/23, 12:17 AM
It's a fun narrative. I feel the corruption of the father and son went a little fast - it would have been much more hot to see it take place over an hour, as they remain confused, stressed, but powerless to resist, and to see them struggle to justify the compulsions they are giving into. but your prose is twisted and wonderful; I love it.
6/24/23, 11:11 PM
Love this so much. Can't wait for more men corrupted by Chairman and brainpig
Leather tref
6/24/23, 10:58 PM
Brilliant, can't wait to see what happens next!
6/24/23, 10:27 PM
Definitely want more of this one!
6/24/23, 10:17 PM
Excelente comienzo.....
6/24/23, 9:42 PM
That was truly exceptional. You did a masterful job of putting the reader into a dreamlike mental state with Jaromir - with more than a dash of suffocating nightmare. You made the transformation hot, the end result hot, even though it's not my usual kind of thing... Hell, you made it *appealing* on some level. I did think that this line "Marek in his basement apartment, watching with arms crossed as one of his friends fucked me in the ass" was jarringly abrupt. It revealed the "mystery" (not that we didn't already know it was Marek, but *Jeremy-as-narrator* didn't). We hadn't heard anything about friends hanging out with them. And we didn't know there was sex involved or even that Marek was gay/bi/whatever. Just too many revelations crammed into one sentence, IMO. The way he reacted to this memory with both orgasm and horror underscored how distinct his personalities were (honestly, that was confusing - was Marek changing Jeremy or creating an alter?), but taken with all the last, I think the impact of that sentence was diffused. Took a while to explain, but don't let the size of that last paragraph make you think it had a proportionally big impact on my enjoyment. Just a minor thing, constructive criticism. I actually still came when I read that part (for the second time!). Since I stop reading these stories and bookmark whenever I cum, I read this in three separate installments over two days. Orgasms much appreciated! As a guy with a similar sneaker kink (I own those carmine J6s, and patent bred J1s, lol), I *really* appreciated how Marek instilled that kink in him too! Christ that was hot. And the way wearing bb shorts (MAREK'S bb shorts!} was so natural for him. Woof!