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6/24/23, 8:37 PM
Honestly the early bizarre stuff like them accepting something like "glue butt" as a part of their identity completely sincerely, or them being prompted to fill in the gaps on what "Sir" means to some otherwise pretty straight and not mindfucked guys was so interesting and well done I was almost disappointed by the more straightforward later on. Not because hat was bad, but because I love seeing weird fresh takes like that, I'd love to see you explore more stuff in that direction in future stories

Swizz
6/24/23, 8:45 PM
@[Tkhon](/user/show/40052) I thought the way that Mateo interpreted 'Sugartits' (which isn't exactly super specific in its meaning, afaik) and created a new personality out of it was not dissimilar to how they filled in the gaps with 'Sir', though I do agree that 'Cocksucker' is a bit on the nose, haha. Thanks for the feedback!

6/24/23, 11:07 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) oh yeah the interpretation of sugartits was the same idea though I kind of wanted to see it blend with Mateo's original personality like the previous ones did

Swizz
6/25/23, 12:24 AM
@[Tkhon](/user/show/40052) Fair enough!

6/25/23, 1:16 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I don't wanna come off too negative because I think this story is very well written, specifically the sentences "I’d offer to get you another drink, but my ass is glued to the seat, right? Being a Glue Butt and all." and "God, why did I have to be such a stupid Glue Butt?!" stuck out to me as really fun because they incorporated such an unnatural idea so casually and naturally. It's good... I dunno, "world building"?

Swizz
6/25/23, 4:13 AM
@[Tkhon](/user/show/40052) No worries, I didn't interpret your post as being negative at all!
6/25/23, 3:45 AM
Oh okay, now i got it, the price of the label wish is his age. Nice, i wonder whats gonna happen next, especially his relationship history with Mason as he gets older.

6/25/23, 4:04 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Yeah that's all in good time. There's at least two more chapters ahead.
6/24/23, 10:49 PM
I keep coming back and re-reading this story, love it, thank you.

6/25/23, 1:51 AM
@[stephenhh](/user/show/1131578) Well, no! Thank you, actually! :p
6/25/23, 12:47 AM
Oh my God, this is fucking brilliant!! You need to make all seven books. Amazing idea and execution!
6/25/23, 12:35 AM
Hope exams went well but very glad you continued!
6/25/23, 12:17 AM
It's a fun narrative. I feel the corruption of the father and son went a little fast - it would have been much more hot to see it take place over an hour, as they remain confused, stressed, but powerless to resist, and to see them struggle to justify the compulsions they are giving into. but your prose is twisted and wonderful; I love it.
6/24/23, 11:11 PM
Love this so much. Can't wait for more men corrupted by Chairman and brainpig
Leather tref
6/24/23, 10:58 PM
Brilliant, can't wait to see what happens next!
6/24/23, 10:27 PM
Definitely want more of this one!
6/24/23, 10:17 PM
Excelente comienzo.....