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Leather tref
6/24/23, 10:58 PM
Brilliant, can't wait to see what happens next!
6/24/23, 10:27 PM
Definitely want more of this one!
6/24/23, 10:17 PM
Excelente comienzo.....
6/24/23, 9:42 PM
That was truly exceptional. You did a masterful job of putting the reader into a dreamlike mental state with Jaromir - with more than a dash of suffocating nightmare. You made the transformation hot, the end result hot, even though it's not my usual kind of thing... Hell, you made it *appealing* on some level. I did think that this line "Marek in his basement apartment, watching with arms crossed as one of his friends fucked me in the ass" was jarringly abrupt. It revealed the "mystery" (not that we didn't already know it was Marek, but *Jeremy-as-narrator* didn't). We hadn't heard anything about friends hanging out with them. And we didn't know there was sex involved or even that Marek was gay/bi/whatever. Just too many revelations crammed into one sentence, IMO. The way he reacted to this memory with both orgasm and horror underscored how distinct his personalities were (honestly, that was confusing - was Marek changing Jeremy or creating an alter?), but taken with all the last, I think the impact of that sentence was diffused. Took a while to explain, but don't let the size of that last paragraph make you think it had a proportionally big impact on my enjoyment. Just a minor thing, constructive criticism. I actually still came when I read that part (for the second time!). Since I stop reading these stories and bookmark whenever I cum, I read this in three separate installments over two days. Orgasms much appreciated! As a guy with a similar sneaker kink (I own those carmine J6s, and patent bred J1s, lol), I *really* appreciated how Marek instilled that kink in him too! Christ that was hot. And the way wearing bb shorts (MAREK'S bb shorts!} was so natural for him. Woof!
Libra
6/24/23, 8:54 PM
I never usually comment but holy shit that was hot!! It could have been me, and that made it even hotter to read :) I do hope there's more coming because I like the way you write x
6/24/23, 7:23 PM
My only beef is taking Orrin’s cock. How more effective to make him a bottom boy with a large cock. As tp the hair loss, use a cream to remove it permanently.
6/24/23, 7:17 PM
Yes! Finally! I think this will be one of my favorite stories on the site.
6/24/23, 7:09 PM
I need more chapters to this. This was awesome and witty and horny at the right moments
Anonymous
6/24/23, 6:49 PM
More please!
Ember
6/24/23, 5:49 PM
Same flavor as my favorite story: “My Roomate Gives Me Nicknames.” So hot. Loved it. ♥️