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6/24/23, 3:21 AM
I’m crying tears of joy, I can’t believe this 😭😭😭 this was such a GIFT! Thank you so much for this. I’m extremely happy to see more people writing about this kink I love so much and just thank you for the kind words and thank you for this series. Jack is a lovely boy and I just can’t get enough of him. I really can’t wait to read more stories about Jack’s massive cock getting stuck inside his friends’ mouths and assholes… maybe even his little brother! Does his little brother maybe also gets to enjoy a ride on Jack’s huge dick? I can’t wait to find out! THANK YOU!

6/24/23, 2:49 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thanks to you for the inspiration Elmara. I really apreciate your words. I’m working in the next chapter and how John manipulate his big, dumb, hung and full of cum big brother… 😜 And I have a question for you Elmara: are you working in some new chapter of your series “slutty naughty jock”?? I never have too much of it!! 🍼🍼🍼
6/24/23, 5:49 AM
A very intriguing beginning to this story. I especially enjoyed the double twist at the end with the CEO's partial plan being revealed followed immediately by the technicians undermining it.

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I wasn't originally going to have the double twist. It was originally going to just be Patrick kind of screwing himself by ignoring the warnings and giving in to his desires. Sean originally only planned to do exactly what he put in the contract and offer, but he gave in to temptation at the last minute to ensure that he had complete control of Patrick. So that meant that Sean needed to be taken down a peg as well. Part of the story's intent was to illustrate how people could be corrupted by this technology, and the three technicians were not completely amoral and we know that whistleblowers are a thing so...

6/24/23, 1:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yeah, I really liked that part and thought it rang true. These technicians would have to be smart people but at the same time they don't have the kind of wealth and power that their boss has. Would they just go along with his shameless plan to enslave someone? Would you? If the opportunity presented itself to be the fly in the ointment to that kind of dastardly plan, wouldn't you do it? I think a lot of people would.
Kipper
6/24/23, 1:27 PM
Colton needs more adventures. He needs cock at the gym, cock at work, cock in the street, and perhaps a kindly neighbor who will take pity on his hungry pussy. You would also benefit from a proofreader, to check some of your words and grammar. Best of luck with a very hot idea.
John
6/24/23, 5:14 AM
Please part 2!

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[John](/user/show/10013303) I'm glad you liked it. Since this is an anthology series, the next part I am planning to post will be its own standalone story dealing with AI. But I agree the characters are really interesting and so is the situation. I probably will revisit this a little later. Even though it's framed in a high-tech setting and gay, this is after all basically the story of a rich man paying for plastic surgery for his companion, and that is absolutely a real thing that happens which means the dramatic beats are completely valid.
TandySensation
6/24/23, 1:06 PM
Nice!
pmk
6/24/23, 1:04 PM
Even years later this is still one of the hottest and most well written stories on this site. Would love to see more one day.
Muscle-Flex
8/25/22, 3:16 AM
Oh man, that was... whew! Yeah, I have to go change my clothes now. You got me going just with Markus's outfit (and his flexing as he checked himself out in his bedroom mirror), but then the squatting scene at the gym with his now mind-warped coach.... that sealed the deal. Woof! Great job. Thanks for another installment. And of course, I can't wait to see what coach has planned next. :muscle:

8/25/22, 12:59 PM
@Muscle-Flex I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! It's been a while since I've written anything, so the writing isn't the best. But I'm really glad you liked it. Having Mark smother himself with his own filthy shirt was one of my favourite parts to write, so I'm glad that general scene was able to get you going. I plan on writing a second chapter soon, for the next part of Marks day at the gym. If you have any suggestions of what our dear mind warped coach could do to our hunky, idiot jock, then I'm all ears

6/24/23, 10:53 AM
@[Rubber_Lover](/user/show/10001519) i really hope this is making good progress- I need thenext part :smiling_imp:
6/24/23, 8:29 AM
Really hot stuff so far! I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens next. And hopefully some very visual morph scenes on the horizon…
6/24/23, 6:42 AM
Most definitely want to read more!
6/24/23, 3:49 AM
I loved this chapter even more than the first. And...something strange and fun was going on in that library basement, and with that frat. I love wondering if there's a weird magic at play.