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BWW
6/23/23, 1:17 PM
Love this! Always get the most excited seeing a new story from you on here :) Especially love the Master getting his fag to write the story in HIS language - a really cool little twist that adds so much to the domination of the former alpha, submitting even linguistically in his new role. Super hot!
6/23/23, 12:45 PM
It’s a cool story! What about the second part?
6/23/23, 12:10 PM
Amazing !! Can’t wait to read the next chapter. That would be so exciting to see Maverick and Jake submit together 🥵.
6/23/23, 11:58 AM
I've been holding my breath for this to continue. No pressure. But you have a great idea here.
6/22/23, 11:25 AM
I've only now found this story, and let me just say: WOW. You're writing skills are amazing. I could feel Kyle's agony as if it was mine, and even though the content is tough I couldn't take my eyes off of this story. I feel so bad for Kyle. I don't know if I could have hold on for so long. While I doubt it, I do hope he will get at least some of his old body back. I guess I'll find out real soon as the next part has already been posted, but I still had to write my thoughts on this part.

6/22/23, 2:32 PM
@Reader Thanks for your kind words! I can’t promise everything will work out the way you hope, but I can promise a resolution. And I’m a sucker for a happy ending… sort of.

6/23/23, 11:05 AM
@[Lloyd Irving](/user/show/346316) I have to admit, I didn't expect receiving a reply on an old story, and I'm really happy that you did. Anyway, I finished reading the story! I rambled on and on in the other comment section, so all I'll say here is WOW!
6/23/23, 5:12 AM
just noticed from rereading: it seems that colour is a large motif in this series, and i'm very interested in how Jamie has permanently shifted to the gold of 013 :3 let's see who's next!
6/23/23, 2:09 AM
Poor Petey just doesn't know who to trust. Hope when all is said and done he grows into his own.
Vikingforce
6/23/23, 1:54 AM
And then what happened? We need more still !
6/23/23, 1:28 AM
yes fight back!!!! be loud and proud!!!