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6/23/23, 5:35 PM
I wonder if they can get the coach as well!
Anonymous
6/23/23, 5:05 PM
We need more scenes with the Reverend, asslicking and blowjobs in perticular. Perhaps in a sauna, nice and sweaty and hairy with Brody face buried in there for hours. Perhaps the good ole Reverend knows a few likeminded priest friends who would like a service
6/23/23, 4:08 PM
off to a hot start, i sure hope you keep going. Love a dump jock, getting humiliated and molested!

Anonymous
6/23/23, 4:57 PM
@[jkstrapme](/user/show/10003903) Thanks dude!
6/23/23, 3:45 PM
I think it took me like 6 attempts to make it to the end of this chapter. That's not meant as a bad thing in any way. I made it a little game... Start off at the beginning of the chapter and read til it made me cum. Then I had to stop and come back to it another time, where I had to start at the beginning again. Yeah, took me like 6 times before I was able to get to Stephen running off and Ryan returning.
Gingcub
6/23/23, 1:32 AM
Not depressing to me at all! Jake is so lucky to be finding his place! Thank you for writing such a hot story. Please keep it up

6/23/23, 3:12 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Thank you, mate! So glad you’re enjoying
BWW
6/23/23, 1:17 PM
Love this! Always get the most excited seeing a new story from you on here :) Especially love the Master getting his fag to write the story in HIS language - a really cool little twist that adds so much to the domination of the former alpha, submitting even linguistically in his new role. Super hot!
6/23/23, 12:45 PM
It’s a cool story! What about the second part?
6/23/23, 12:10 PM
Amazing !! Can’t wait to read the next chapter. That would be so exciting to see Maverick and Jake submit together 🥵.
6/23/23, 11:58 AM
I've been holding my breath for this to continue. No pressure. But you have a great idea here.
6/22/23, 11:25 AM
I've only now found this story, and let me just say: WOW. You're writing skills are amazing. I could feel Kyle's agony as if it was mine, and even though the content is tough I couldn't take my eyes off of this story. I feel so bad for Kyle. I don't know if I could have hold on for so long. While I doubt it, I do hope he will get at least some of his old body back. I guess I'll find out real soon as the next part has already been posted, but I still had to write my thoughts on this part.

6/22/23, 2:32 PM
@Reader Thanks for your kind words! I can’t promise everything will work out the way you hope, but I can promise a resolution. And I’m a sucker for a happy ending… sort of.

6/23/23, 11:05 AM
@[Lloyd Irving](/user/show/346316) I have to admit, I didn't expect receiving a reply on an old story, and I'm really happy that you did. Anyway, I finished reading the story! I rambled on and on in the other comment section, so all I'll say here is WOW!