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6/22/23, 11:22 PM
What if in an alternate ending Danny had succumbed to the temptation and desires of revenge and had made David his slave?
Vikingforce
6/22/23, 11:05 PM
Can't wait to see what else cums up !
6/22/23, 9:39 PM
Jack you are always worth waiting for. Mav shows up, Pete, learns to submit. Sammy is there. You are a genius.
6/22/23, 9:39 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter! One of the best stories I've read so far
Anonymous
6/22/23, 9:31 PM
Yeah, definitely getting pretty depressing. Not bad, but a bit of a bummer to read.
Vikingforce
6/22/23, 9:23 PM
I hope the series continues ! Look forward to reading much more from your mind ! I wonder what other surprises you can possibly cum up with !
6/22/23, 7:16 PM
Second read as good as the first. Jake, as I have said before, you have the gift to write & tell a good story
Tim
6/22/23, 6:18 PM
...I can understand Dan completely - it was always a complete thrill to me being traded as a worker and treated as object - just a useful object.
6/22/23, 4:05 PM
Thanks for the explanation. I still hope his tie to Matt remains unbroken.

6/22/23, 4:15 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) You’ll find out next time
6/22/23, 3:01 PM
Depressing, Jake is is all but gone, nothing left!

6/22/23, 3:04 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) How so?

6/22/23, 3:09 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) He acts as a robot going through the motions with no hope & just the fear of being sold.

6/22/23, 3:58 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I get where you’re coming from. My intention for this chapter was to show that Jake can’t afford to revert back. He must submit…he must serve…just like every other slave in the compound. That is how they survive. The old Jake isn’t dead…not yet anyways. He still has one more hurdle to cross