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9/10/25, 10:13 PM
How much AI assist went into this? It has several phrase and structure features that are very unusual for stories written by humans.

9/10/25, 10:50 PM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) None
9/9/25, 3:58 AM
This story continues to be fun and poignant. If i wasn't reading it on an erotic gay mind control site I'd think i was reading a YA novel (complimentary). Its interesting to read what's basically an Aardvark story, but from the PoV of the people left in the wake of the change. Reminds me of my favorite story on this site, "Husbros and Son" by Kods (and since you mentioned both in the footnotes, I'm assuming that's not a coincidence). Good luck on future chapters, I'm interested to see what you come up with.

9/10/25, 9:08 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) I didn't actually read that until after Chapter Two of this story was posted. So, actually, it is a coincidence! As for this being "basically an Aardvark story," I will say he and I have had... some words about that. I don't think I did it consciously, though this comes from a place reminiscent of _The Coronation_. What I'd hasten to point out is that this isn't focused on a long-term TF, but the fallout from a rather quick one, like you pointed out. Thank you for the good luck! There's some interesting stuff coming.

9/10/25, 12:37 PM
@[Travis Ramsey](/user/show/10050627) To be clear, i don't think your work is copying or derivative of Aardvark (or Kods). Your work is your work, and I'm enjoying it for and as YOUR work. There are similarities and they're interesting to point out (especially because you've worked with them), but ultimately I'm here for you and what you've written. Anything else is incidental. (Plus i think you said in one of your footnotes that the TF wasn't even part of the original plan)

9/10/25, 9:12 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Hah, thank you again. That does ease my nerves a bit. Further TF wasn't in the cards at first, no. But now there's some fun coming. To quote the Third Doctor in [_The Time Warrior_](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37HTMmBM2eU)... "A straight line may be the shortest distance between two points, but it is by no means the most interesting!"
9/10/25, 8:18 AM
This is such a hot story! I’m really looking forward to the next chapters—I hope they get approved. Would you post elsewhere if they don’t?

9/10/25, 8:13 PM
@[Balder](/user/show/938357) Sure thing, open to any suggestions as to where if they don't get approved here
9/10/25, 6:06 PM
Another great story. Please continue this!
9/10/25, 10:17 AM
the transformation is arousing

9/10/25, 4:58 PM
@[taah5b1](/user/show/10063069) Thank you!
9/10/25, 4:10 PM
Good Lord this was amazing. Hopefully Garret's not fully broken but just swept away by the Pheromones. Just slight enough to feel horny and bottom.
9/10/25, 11:43 AM
I think it's so fucking hot that at the traditional post competition pig out fest, everybody at the table, except Vlad and Ali, has been fucking Brian like a cock hungry slut on a the regular! Go Mr J! LOL
9/10/25, 10:38 AM
Hi, the idea is very good, it seems to be written well, but there is something to work on. First, the events happen too quickly and we do not see how the transformation occurs and how the person fights it, whether he understands what is happening to him and tries to resist it. Second: the sex scenes are very short, there are also no longer dialogues between the characters and what they feel after meeting when they have not seen each other for quite a long time.
6/21/24, 10:59 AM
I, for one, don't want to see Brian top. I love that the more muscular and masculine he becomes, the more submissive and slutty he becomes. Even with women. He isn't fucking them because he is a pussy hound out making conquests, but because they want him to fuck them and he complies with their desires. It's as if Sam is somehow re-writing Brian's basic nature, transforming him from a man into an obedient sex slave. I love the series, btw. Each chapter is full of hot sex and submission.

6/23/24, 5:56 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) Thanks for the love. Yeah Mr Johnson has a lot of fun to have, but I don't think he'll ever be a pussy hound

9/10/25, 9:17 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) LOVED all the spanking, (I mean for Brian, tho I wouldn't say no) thanks! Did "Mr. Chan" fuck Brian right after? It was kinda left "open ended". Did Brian show up to the hot tub with bright red cheeks AND a pussy full of cum?

9/10/25, 9:24 AM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) No, Mr Chan would never fuck one of his boys at work. Not appropriate... and anyway, that might give Brian mixed messages ha ha ha!
6/16/24, 12:40 PM
This story... it is just FANTASTIC! The trio sex at the end of this chapter is just so good. SO GOOD! I love the FUN of the writing and the excitement I feel for Mr Johnson and his new exciting life. THANK YOU for this wonderful story and this fun-filled writing. back to the keyboard!

6/16/24, 1:25 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Oh thank god you liked the last scene, I was banging that one out, while high on poppers and Johnny Castle hetero-porn [not exactly but the life of an erotic writer should surely be allowed some embellishments]. I'm glad you're loving the "fun" too. I'm a great proponent that sex is awesome and no one needs to be drugged, tricked or blackmailed into having it!

I wasnt familiar with Johnny Castle porn... and WOW! He is just writer's material. He is gentle and sensual and his body is beautiful. Write more for me!
6/18/24, 11:50 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362)

6/18/24, 12:22 PM
For a straight porn star... yes definitely hot. The Pure Mature videos are so cool

9/10/25, 9:07 AM
@[Todd Mitchell](/user/show/10039362) He's Italian (Birth name: Rocco Santini). Just say'n... LOL

9/10/25, 9:23 AM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) Born in NJ actually... but I am definitely learning something every day https://the-vague-unsung.fandom.com/wiki/Johnny_Castle