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6/19/23, 7:59 PM
Err, that's an incredible story, sir. I'm literally glued on my sticky seat right now. Can't wait for any new story you can pull off in the future! Btw I help people sell/get some money out of Hypno stories. If you are interested in that you can contact/dm me on twitter https://twitter.com/satyroom
6/19/23, 7:51 PM
A great finale, loose ends tied up, so to speak
Swizz
6/19/23, 5:48 PM
Is it just me or is there no actual mind control in this story?

6/19/23, 5:54 PM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) Rules never said their had to be. It's about the power of a name. The warrant pad uses the name to capture and control a person. One of the examples in the rules didn't use mind control either: An office worker gets pranked with a name badge reading “Richard Sucker”… and now the whole office is convinced he’s a total blowjob slut!

Swizz
6/19/23, 7:17 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) It's one of the primary rules of the GSS site. GSS is dedicated to stories depicting men under some kind of mind control/hypnosis

Martin
6/19/23, 7:28 PM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) There is a transformation into a rubber man. And transformation is also a very central theme of GSS from the beginning. So it's absolutely fine for GSS. If there were no tf and no mind control, it could still be appropriate on one of the other sites. But as it is, it fits perfectly on GSS.

6/19/23, 7:28 PM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) The challenge is for all sites. GSS doesn't have to be mind control. It also has stories with themes of transformation, magic control, shrinking ect. On the site.

6/19/23, 7:29 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you!
6/19/23, 7:06 PM
God I love dirty talk and domination transformation. Great chapter! I wish (no pun intended) we would see more like that
6/19/23, 6:29 PM
Excellent beginning! It's nice to see facial hair and body hair growth and it not be seen as a punishment or on just older men. Please keep it going. It could be more descriptive in the changes but I always like them detailed. :smiley:
6/19/23, 5:54 PM
Well done! Hope we can see more.

6/19/23, 5:55 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Tysm! I could definitely see potential to explore this series concept further.
Edgingfun
6/19/23, 5:11 PM
Hot! Thanks for the arousing ideas. Now I’m hard 😇

6/19/23, 5:54 PM
@Edgingfun Glad I could help 😈
SubCopenhagen
6/19/23, 5:17 PM
Horny story. Do like the punishments.

6/19/23, 5:54 PM
@SubCopenhagen Thanks! The punishments are the most fun to write.
6/19/23, 5:03 PM
Just saw that the new Summer Break chapter is out so I went back and re-read this one. DAMNNNNN this is a hot chapter. There's definitely something hot about the part at the end where the idea of the other prospects "breaking" comes up. This story's got 2 ways to provide some dramatic tension -- the friend that's trying to "save" him from the transformation and the idea that while, yeah, transforming is super hot, there's an even better reward at the end if you can resist part of the change long enough for the even better thing to come along. So as a reader, while we may be really craving for him to change faster and faster, part of us is rooting for things to hold off cuz we want the even bigger thing to happen. I guess it's a kind of edging, in a way. Could cum now, or hold off and let it build up and feel even more intense pleasure when you unload later on.
6/19/23, 4:52 PM
This is hot! Nice set up. Hope the four can live good lives together. Hope the three become good subby bottoms for our main guy who I hope is a top.