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6/19/23, 5:22 AM
Suuuuuuuuper hot!! I can't wait to see Eli's punishment. It could be an interesting chance to see more of his dynamic with Mac... After all, doctors are rather infamous for their disdain for nurses, so I wonder what the uncle could really think of his haughty, prick nephew? I also assume Vince is somehow going to work his way around to controlling Sam, especially now that he knows what's going on under the Kingstons' roof and could cause him some serious trouble? Given that he's such an unrepentant prick for even pettier reasons than the other men in his life, I wonder if he could present the perfect opportunity for Vince to acquire a guinea pig that he doesn't feel too bad about really screwing with and really testing the limits of his program? Ah, the possibilities! I also wanted to say that this story otherwise has been a really pleasant suprise (aside from it being blisteringly hot!). I'm not usually into emotional intimacy where mind control is concerned, but you've really managed to incorporate it into your story in a way that I feel adds to the hotness, and I guess the overall depravity. Really hope you'll be continuing the story, Blackjinx123!
6/19/23, 3:06 AM
Baralai, I adore your stories and their erotic imagination. But someone has to put their love for these stories to good use and edit them for you in the future. They're readable, but oh my, the weird grammar and spelling issues ;-) still, I can't help but be delighted by them despite the serious editing problem.
6/19/23, 2:00 AM
interesting idea. Tele-sex! When the roommate started to make a flashlight, I thought he was going to put his ring on the protagonist's dick so that the protagonist could fuck himself.

6/19/23, 2:55 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Another day mayhaps.
6/19/23, 12:11 AM
That was a very original cock tf story. I did like that it didn't end with the perming actually happening yet. There could still be some fun in a second part. It would also be interesting if Stan gets released after being put through this. The power dynamic of two predators going at each other was really interesting as well. There was one technical detail that did bother me though not greatly. It did distract me though so I thought I'd mention it just as constructive comment. David's girth is actually too big to fit into a mouth, so I would have liked it if there was just a quick line about how Stan felt his lips and jaw start to stretch under David's power (whether the mechanism was mutagenic precum or just straight magical transformation). Similarly he probably should have felt his throat enlarging to take the dick. Having the face/jaw/throat start to stretch as a prelude to the greater transformation is pretty fun, and considering how sensually the rest was written, a missed opportunity here.

6/19/23, 2:53 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Thanks for the feedback! I do intend to finish this story some day, which is why I didn't have Stan permed just yet. Also, yeah I just sorta waved away the logistics of Stan actually being able to fit David's cock in his mouth with porn physics, but I guess that's what happens to most logistics in these kinds of stories lol.
Anonymous
6/19/23, 1:42 AM
Hot!
6/19/23, 1:24 AM
A great story, I'm looking forward to the sequel. Please don't take too long
6/18/23, 10:37 PM
The merman group grows!

6/19/23, 12:02 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Just have to lose 2 more pesky pairs of legs. ❤️
6/18/23, 7:56 AM
There's a nice pace and rhythm to your writing.

6/18/23, 11:44 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Thanks! I try to keep the pacing tight, but not leave anything out. I trust everyone's imaginations can fill in the gaps if there's something I miss, though.
6/18/23, 11:23 PM
Very hot and tempting!
6/18/23, 9:37 PM
Loved this! Pretty rare to find a good inanimate tf!

6/18/23, 11:17 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Wow! I will take it as a compliment!