Baralai, I adore your stories and their erotic imagination. But someone has to put their love for these stories to good use and edit them for you in the future. They're readable, but oh my, the weird grammar and spelling issues ;-) still, I can't help but be delighted by them despite the serious editing problem.

interesting idea. Tele-sex! When the roommate started to make a flashlight, I thought he was going to put his ring on the protagonist's dick so that the protagonist could fuck himself.

That was a very original cock tf story. I did like that it didn't end with the perming actually happening yet. There could still be some fun in a second part. It would also be interesting if Stan gets released after being put through this. The power dynamic of two predators going at each other was really interesting as well. There was one technical detail that did bother me though not greatly. It did distract me though so I thought I'd mention it just as constructive comment. David's girth is actually too big to fit into a mouth, so I would have liked it if there was just a quick line about how Stan felt his lips and jaw start to stretch under David's power (whether the mechanism was mutagenic precum or just straight magical transformation). Similarly he probably should have felt his throat enlarging to take the dick. Having the face/jaw/throat start to stretch as a prelude to the greater transformation is pretty fun, and considering how sensually the rest was written, a missed opportunity here.

Hot!

A great story, I'm looking forward to the sequel. Please don't take too long

The merman group grows!

There's a nice pace and rhythm to your writing.

Very hot and tempting!

Loved this! Pretty rare to find a good inanimate tf!

So, Kane is wrong in his assertion that Jamie didn't deny that Midnight was his boyfriend. Jamie did flat out deny that. However, he's correct to suspect that Jamie is protecting Master Myriad, because Jamie actually is protecting Master. We don't know if this is a conscious or unconscious choice on Jamie's part, or some kind of compulsion put in place by Master and enforced by 013, or 013 on its own subtly preventing him from betraying Master. The fact is that at this point, Jamie is protecting Master. Jamie's memories have returned, and he is experiencing Master's and 013's concerted efforts to persuade him to become a loyal DS. He knows more about Master and his operation than anyone in the League. The information he could give them might be the difference between defeat and victory for the League. Yet, it doesn’t seem to have even occured to him to tell them what's happening to him, and what he knows about Master and his Network, at least from what we see of his internal monologue. So what's going on there? There are several possibilities. It could be that he is so off-kilter right now that he hasn't even had a chance to think about it. It could be a conscious or unconscious choice made as a function of his instinct for self-preservation. Let's face it, if he somehow manages to spill all, the League is unlikely to give him the honor he'd deserve for doing it, and quite likely to send him to the Tomb. It could be that Master and/or 013 are exerting a subtle influence that restrains him, and keeps him from even thinking about telling Master's secrets to the League. In any case, given what 013 revealed about its imperatives, and the level of control 013 can exert over Jamie even now, I'd say that 013 would do whatever it takes to stop Jamie from confessing. Allowing it would place both Jamie and Master in severe danger, and violate both of 013's prime directives. So, what do you think about why Jamie is remaining silent?