Recent Comments

6/13/23, 8:45 PM
This looks like a very interesting premise and I'd like to read more. I am a bit confused why Liam didn't have to pay any price for turning Mason gay or how does he know that becoming a jock will require (what I can only assume) stealing the other jocks' gains. Also I was surprised that Liam wasn't really concerned about the fact that his grandfather is a fucking lamp. Still, I am really excited to read more and see if Liam will be corrupt by his new found powers or if he'll know when to stop before it goes wrong.

6/13/23, 8:50 PM
@Reader All in due time.

6/17/23, 9:20 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) See and I read the "price" for that first one was getting what he wanted but what he wanted not wanting him. Sort of a Genie in the lamp trickster price of needing to be specific in the wording of the wish to make certain you get what you actually want and not just what you asked for.

Anonymous
6/18/23, 10:47 AM
@[zimdog](/user/show/934645) I think that is true, but the label maker said it had enough energy stored to grant one wish. I think it has to ruin lives o improve the users, that is essentially the exchange.
ThatOneReader
6/18/23, 7:35 AM
Always loved stories where the family dynamics are messed with , where wife is stolen or changed and husband is changed in the process n turned . Don't see many of those these days . Loved the way it was simple to understand what was going on and didn't change everybody involved in too many rediculous ways , when there are dozens of changes to one person it makes it harder to follow . But this story has real possibilities, loved it .
6/18/23, 6:21 AM
This has been an amazing series, I love it! Now they seem to be openly competing for Tim, I wonder how his Dad an Oliver will react to what happened in this chapter. I hope you decide to continue this series one day :)
Jun 13, 2023
6/14/23, 4:58 PM
Absolutely agree!!! Very hot story! Was this written as a chapter of a bigger story you have planned? Just curious cuz it said "Series" under a bigger umbrella title.

6/18/23, 6:00 AM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Thank you for the positive reception! This was my first submission to the site, and I wasn't really sure if a series would be warranted if this hadn't gone so well. A sequel may be on the way :)
Anonymous
6/18/23, 5:48 AM
When will we get to see the “warm kind and welcoming” side of Dusk again Especially I anticipate them making out with latex tongue and latex tight grips
6/18/23, 5:05 AM
This was interesting. Not my cup of tea, but interesting.
Jun 17, 2023
6/18/23, 4:21 AM
Such a sensitive touching story!!!

6/18/23, 4:45 AM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) Thank you! I was literally sobbing as I wrote it.
6/18/23, 4:44 AM
Amazing story! Super hot and very well written!
James
6/18/23, 4:34 AM
Another excellent story.
abc123
6/18/23, 3:14 AM
Love it~!