Recent Comments

6/17/23, 7:56 PM
The complexity of the coin/pet relationship is one of my favorite things about this series, aside from the truly exemplary writing and imagination displayed. It's such a caring relationship while also being so deeply strong in power dynamics. And Aristotle's subtle manipulation of Jasper, while problematic in the real world, makes for such good story.

6/18/23, 2:30 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Those dynamics along with the lore of the culture are definitely a huge part of what I love about writing this story with Cuddle-switch, so it's great to hear that that's part of what you're enjoying the most! Actually, Cuddle-switch and I wrote a short roleplaying game based on the Golden Lattice Ceremony -- I'm just working on some illustrations for the layout and it'll be ready to go!
Anonymous
6/17/23, 11:34 PM
when will dusk come :DDDdDdDdDdDD
Anonymous
6/17/23, 11:21 PM
Terrific

Swizz
6/17/23, 11:27 PM
@Anonymous Thanks!
Ypnoss
6/17/23, 11:14 PM
Hoooootttt, wanna be a sugartit myself I like the explanation of the powers and the ramble lol. They still make no sense but that somehow anchors it

Swizz
6/17/23, 11:22 PM
@[Ypnoss](/user/show/10000503) Glad you found it hot! Yeah, I suppose the mechanics behind the mind control aren't explained too clearly. Maybe if I write a continuation to this I'll flesh it out more!
6/17/23, 11:18 PM
Ooooof...this is so hot. It hits right where I like it most: complete cluelessness and utter disregard for the people who are being COMPLETELY re-written in real time. Sugartits is my personal fave :P Great work, whoever wrote this!!
Jun 13, 2023
Anonymous
6/17/23, 11:02 PM
Such a hot musk story. We don’t get enough farts on this website so it really made me happy!
6/17/23, 9:32 PM
More please! Love the growth of submission. Would like to see more public play, Thor going to any lengths to please his master
James
6/17/23, 9:20 PM
Holy Shit what a hot Chapter.
Anonymous
6/12/23, 10:42 PM
The 500+ word intro was written by AI, right? Just wondering... It doesn't seem to have much to do with the actual story.

6/12/23, 10:52 PM
@Anonymous Is there something wrong with setting a scene?

Anonymous
6/12/23, 11:32 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Of course not. It's just, in my opinion, about twice the length it needs to be to accomplish the effect you're going for. It's better for the reader if you can paint the picture more concisely, and trust them to fill in the details with their imagination. You ever hear that saying, "If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter"? This introduction drags on. And worse, the flowery tone of the introduction doesn't match the rest of the prose. I'm just offering some feedback. You're welcome to ignore it.

6/13/23, 12:12 AM
@Anonymous Naw I appreciate feedback and perhaps I need to rethink the intro.

6/17/23, 9:18 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) See...and I appreciated the intro as a setting for a multi-chapter story. Let the majors their pursuing their changes if they have them. Make the Wide Receiver someone who loves to be fisted---you know, a WIDE RECEIVER. If this was a stand alone perhaps Anon has a point, but hoping this can become a series. Maybe bring grandpa back....who knows. Lots of options.
James
6/17/23, 8:18 PM
All I gotta say is Fuck Me🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪