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6/15/23, 8:42 PM
I was eagerly waiting for the next chapter this week and it didn’t come! Glad I read through the comments. Good luck on exams!
Elm
6/15/23, 8:27 PM
Overall I liked it, but it needs a few revisions (I gather you used some kind of AI to help you with your writing. I can tell from the over use of "I couldn't help", or the way it stiffly describes some scenes). It's fine to use AI (in my opinion, as it can help with structure or phrasing), but you have to add your own soul to it, the machine won't do it for you. But what do I know haha
6/15/23, 6:49 PM
great story. a demon that can be hired to punish bad people and thereby discover their good (gay) side
6/15/23, 5:55 PM
This is so damn wholesome my god. Wholesome, well written and I love everyone in it. Yarif is peak himbo and I love him.

6/15/23, 6:15 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Awww. Shucks dude. Thanks for the read. Ehh... Yeah. He really is a character close to my heart. I sure hope he doesn't get too badly messed around in the story...:eyes:
6/15/23, 4:57 PM
I really enjoyed this! I've always been a fan of hypno stories and this was double the fun! Add in the images, and I was picturing it. I would love to see more.

6/15/23, 5:01 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Thanks so much man, so glad you liked it
6/15/23, 3:55 PM
the kind of stories which I've been longing to read 😭
Anonymous
6/15/23, 3:40 PM
A great start can’t wait to read more
6/14/23, 3:37 PM
I am really liking Onyx as a character. He's only made two short appearances so far, but he's been impressive. Aside from being my physical ideal for a man, his personality is so larger than life, even becoming a drone couldn't really tame him. His combination of brat, frat bro, and deadly hunter is really intriguing. My guess is that he uses the former to disguise the latter, and that this is what makes him so good at what he does. I'm really looking forward to seeing his character development and how he goes about making his mission a success.

6/14/23, 11:59 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) I wonder what does Onyx think of Master's superdrones. Is he jealous? is he friends with all of them? does he play with some of them on sunday? many thoughts, and little answers. . .

6/15/23, 2:03 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I don't think there's much jealousy among Master's drones. That would be counterproductive to their common goals, and them all being part of the Network facilitates a degree of understanding. They all take pride in their roles. Though there may be some competition among them. And they're not completely conflict free, as the near argument between 05 and 011 in Chapter 4 suggests. As for Onyx's relations with the superdrones, I'd guess he's happy to work with them when needed, and he certainly loves helping Master acquire new ones. So first they are his prey, and once converted, they are useful colleagues and brother drones.

Anonymous
6/15/23, 12:28 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Does Master allow cross-drone-types to play with each other? It could be fun if hound drones and pupper drones could frolic around

6/15/23, 1:16 PM
@Anonymous I think he does occasionally, though bear in mind the hounds are in human form (and not even visibly larexed) most of the time. And they are busy, with a lot of work to do. Assuming that the beasts mentioned early in the dream were DHs in a K9ish form, I suppose they could be allowed to play with pups in that form.
6/15/23, 1:02 PM
Thanks for sharing a great story. Kept me hard the "hole" time. Hoping for a prequel that explains how the boys found the rune and special ink. Are there other marks they can draw that makes the man more attractive, the cock larger, nipples more sensitive, or the butt able to milk a second load out of a spent cock? Nothing better than a muscle up and dumb down erotic story.
MTG
6/15/23, 9:07 AM
Still waiting for Chapter 4! Please come soon!