Recent Comments

6/15/23, 8:10 PM
Please don’t tell me this is the end 😭😭😭. Good chapter as always, your writing is perfect.

6/15/23, 8:11 PM
@[Angel πŸ˜‡](/user/show/10027188) Nope just the first story arc

6/16/23, 12:15 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) thank the Good Lord.
6/15/23, 10:47 PM
Definitely seeing the start to some ulterior motives from the dad. Liking it.
6/15/23, 10:35 PM
Please continue the story of this clowns' toy
6/15/23, 9:49 PM
Interesting turn of events. I’m excited to see what comes next.
Jan 13, 2019
Vikingforce
6/15/23, 8:45 PM
Fuckn gr8 mate, need more
6/15/23, 8:44 PM
I absolutely adore the slow-burn nature of this. The imagery is amazing, and the little hints of what is to come are so titillating. Just fantastic.
6/15/23, 8:42 PM
I was eagerly waiting for the next chapter this week and it didn’t come! Glad I read through the comments. Good luck on exams!
Elm
6/15/23, 8:27 PM
Overall I liked it, but it needs a few revisions (I gather you used some kind of AI to help you with your writing. I can tell from the over use of "I couldn't help", or the way it stiffly describes some scenes). It's fine to use AI (in my opinion, as it can help with structure or phrasing), but you have to add your own soul to it, the machine won't do it for you. But what do I know haha
6/15/23, 6:49 PM
great story. a demon that can be hired to punish bad people and thereby discover their good (gay) side
6/15/23, 5:55 PM
This is so damn wholesome my god. Wholesome, well written and I love everyone in it. Yarif is peak himbo and I love him.

6/15/23, 6:15 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Awww. Shucks dude. Thanks for the read. Ehh... Yeah. He really is a character close to my heart. I sure hope he doesn't get too badly messed around in the story...:eyes: