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6/14/23, 3:37 PM
I am really liking Onyx as a character. He's only made two short appearances so far, but he's been impressive. Aside from being my physical ideal for a man, his personality is so larger than life, even becoming a drone couldn't really tame him. His combination of brat, frat bro, and deadly hunter is really intriguing. My guess is that he uses the former to disguise the latter, and that this is what makes him so good at what he does. I'm really looking forward to seeing his character development and how he goes about making his mission a success.

6/14/23, 11:59 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) I wonder what does Onyx think of Master's superdrones. Is he jealous? is he friends with all of them? does he play with some of them on sunday? many thoughts, and little answers. . .

6/15/23, 2:03 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I don't think there's much jealousy among Master's drones. That would be counterproductive to their common goals, and them all being part of the Network facilitates a degree of understanding. They all take pride in their roles. Though there may be some competition among them. And they're not completely conflict free, as the near argument between 05 and 011 in Chapter 4 suggests. As for Onyx's relations with the superdrones, I'd guess he's happy to work with them when needed, and he certainly loves helping Master acquire new ones. So first they are his prey, and once converted, they are useful colleagues and brother drones.

Anonymous
6/15/23, 12:28 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Does Master allow cross-drone-types to play with each other? It could be fun if hound drones and pupper drones could frolic around

6/15/23, 1:16 PM
@Anonymous I think he does occasionally, though bear in mind the hounds are in human form (and not even visibly larexed) most of the time. And they are busy, with a lot of work to do. Assuming that the beasts mentioned early in the dream were DHs in a K9ish form, I suppose they could be allowed to play with pups in that form.
6/15/23, 1:02 PM
Thanks for sharing a great story. Kept me hard the "hole" time. Hoping for a prequel that explains how the boys found the rune and special ink. Are there other marks they can draw that makes the man more attractive, the cock larger, nipples more sensitive, or the butt able to milk a second load out of a spent cock? Nothing better than a muscle up and dumb down erotic story.
MTG
6/15/23, 9:07 AM
Still waiting for Chapter 4! Please come soon!
Anonymous
6/15/23, 7:58 AM
great start. I think it would be hotter to leave him as a jock stud and up the humiliation level. have him in a cock-cage and turn him into a muscled slutty little pussy bitch with his tiny dick in slutty lace panties
Blaze
6/15/23, 6:37 AM
Will there be a next part on this story? I really want to reed it because it such a nice and interesting story. I can’t wait to.
6/15/23, 6:13 AM
You threw me with the term: BEANIE. I've always thought that BEANIE was a kid's cap or a woman's hat. But I see that in some parts of the world, BEANIE is the word that we in the States might call a SKULL CAP or a WATCH CAP.
6/15/23, 6:10 AM
If the other cops don’t help him out and fuck him, do they really care?
archer19cm
6/15/23, 5:37 AM
Loved this. Hope you add on to this and ramp up 'Tony's' further development into a drone stoner for the drug.
6/15/23, 3:34 AM
I hope you consider writing some more on this idea with maybe descriptions of stuff that happens when the product makes its way out into the market.
Jack
6/15/23, 1:49 AM
Awesome story. Gotta love the power of clowns