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6/15/23, 6:13 AM
You threw me with the term: BEANIE. I've always thought that BEANIE was a kid's cap or a woman's hat. But I see that in some parts of the world, BEANIE is the word that we in the States might call a SKULL CAP or a WATCH CAP.
6/15/23, 6:10 AM
If the other cops don’t help him out and fuck him, do they really care?
archer19cm
6/15/23, 5:37 AM
Loved this. Hope you add on to this and ramp up 'Tony's' further development into a drone stoner for the drug.
6/15/23, 3:34 AM
I hope you consider writing some more on this idea with maybe descriptions of stuff that happens when the product makes its way out into the market.
Jack
6/15/23, 1:49 AM
Awesome story. Gotta love the power of clowns
6/13/23, 1:53 AM
Yes! Yes! Fucking Yes! I've been waiting for this! And this was just as good as the previous chapters. And I really like where the next chapter is heading. I will try and reframe from theories or suggestions. Your work in this series has been some of the best it has read of this rubber superhero genre. I really look forward to your next chapter.

6/13/23, 6:27 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks so much for the comment! Go ahead with the theories! I love them, and they help me organise my ideas a bit better. If you have any specific comments or critiques, comment them, or message me on discord.

6/15/23, 12:27 AM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Well thank you for the invite. I will start with one criticism for this chapter. Just after Luxor tries to go to the gym there feels like some time dilation occurs. How soon had he stepped out to when Jamie had to be stuck in the latex for 15 minutes? It doesn't feel like it adds up. As to theories and questions it has about the upcoming chapter. The sudden and timely coincidence of Jamie offering to go to the gym with Luxor just after his forced conditioning does imply that the symbiote got him to do that. Which is backed by the fact the gym is a place Myriad controls. And that Alex is there. Another thought/theory is how much Alex will work them both? Or will he largely focus on Luxor? Also I have been curious about the musk/scent kink growing in Luxor. Its clearly from the symbiote he doesn't know he has on him, but to what end? Does Myriad plan on having him as a type of hound? Or is this a more repressed kink that is being brought to light? But on the other hand, how can Alex be equipped to begin influencing Luxor to begin with? What exploits does he know? What information did he get from DT-X? This could be a great chance for the shapeshifter to come into play. Have him be a second Alex or even a Midnight (human version) would have its benefits. But they have a month of house arrest. So things can't go too fast. So the question is how covertly can Myriad operate in getting both heroes to convert?
6/14/23, 11:04 PM
One of the best chapters yet ❤️
6/14/23, 9:03 PM
Love to hear more about how they put the baby to sleep. Do they do it with Hypnosis or do they do it with some sleep medication so that the baby sleeps all through the night.
6/14/23, 7:12 PM
Hypnosis and armpits are two of my most biggest kinks. So thank you for writing this very sexy and hot story! I hope you make more! I wanna know what happens next with Aaron, how his mind and body gets slowly moulded by his new Master. 🤤
Anonymous
6/14/23, 7:11 PM
The change from third person to first person and then back again was very confusing.