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Anonymous
6/14/23, 12:12 AM
who wants to bet that we already know who "Alex" is :wink:
6/13/23, 9:16 PM
This was a neat concept. The 'hot box' approach was unexpected and novel! I like the implication that for a normal stoner it'd just encourage repeat business but too much has more serious changes. Though still guarantees business with maybe some side hustle. ;)

6/13/23, 11:55 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you! I appreciate it! It was a fun story to write too.
6/13/23, 10:03 PM
one theory I have is about Kane: I think that we can see how in chapter 5, Master and Luxor's band both see how Jamie's weakness is how alone and vulnerable he feels. This is really big material, as we can see 013 remedying that (which honestly I'm not surprised if Jamie accepts dronification, there's almost nothing left for him to lose being in the League) now Kane, we see that he has a lot of weaknesses that are kind of subtle, yet really deep! If master can coordinate Alex and Luxor's latex drop to manipulate his desires, and offer a solution, then we may see DS-014 very very soon. . . As for ideas on *how* Master could exploit his weaknesses? I think that Kane is secretly incredibly insecure, and wants approval from higher authority. Maybe it's because he grew up insanely rich and well prepared, so he kind of knows that what he has is not really earned. Maybe that's why he seeks approval and attention from Valour, his parents, and even some jealousy from Midnight treating him "only" equally! My theory, and provably not real, is that Kane will seek to be strong, and as it is revealed just how strong Jamie is, he will feel hopeless. And in the dark void that is ennui, Master will offer a solution to cure him. For Luxor to be a new hero, sparkling with new powers, and enrobed in latex. . .
Siddhartha
3/3/23, 2:01 AM
What a helluva writer you are! Just gripped from the first line... This was the first story I read... Hooked... will keep coming back for more...

6/13/23, 9:39 PM
@Siddhartha Great to know this story still packs a punch! Glad you enjoyed it.
Jun 13, 2023
Martin
6/13/23, 8:12 PM
That was .... amazingly hot!
6/13/23, 6:29 PM
Please Continue!
6/13/23, 6:08 PM
Absolutely loved this this! More raunchy rubber skinheads, please.
Anonymous
10/24/18, 5:12 AM
bring chapter 3!!! :D

James
6/13/23, 5:54 PM
@Anonymous Oh this really needs a chapter 3 and more.
6/9/23, 1:37 AM
I continue to love the way you write this, and if I had one tiny criticism, it's that while 99% of the time you show, for some reason you just out-and-out tell us Ethan's strange and contradictory attributes/powers, when I think the subtle acts of gazing into his eyes or suddenly changing their minds you already do is enough for us to figure it out for ourselves. I like figuring out what's up with these fun supernatural characters, so it's a little disappointing (but just a little!) to have the game given up for us. But again: bangin' stories in a fun world!

6/13/23, 5:30 PM
Funny you should mention, @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419). In some now-deleted comments on Ethan’s first instalment, there was some confusion as to how his powers worked or what was going on, so I decided in *Laundromat* to just lean into explicit explanation as a narrative device and try to mine it for humour. Individual mileage on that idea may vary, I suppose. Regardless, thank you for your comments! I’m glad the series is working for you on the whole.