I liked it. I think something thing about fascination. As he looked at the demon it become more intriguing, he felt, he wanted to look more to touch. It called to something deep within. He almost laughed and touched his cock. Demon was beautiful. He crawled towards it.

Like how it took longer to convince Liam to taste his own pre than Noah's. The further they get the more resistant Liam seems. Maybe Noah shouldn't let him cum so fast to motivate him more.

Great story so far.. a slow burn that actually goes somewhere. Great balance of angst and payoff. Great pacing. Do your thing bro

So hotttttt

I love it.

Just fantastic, love the introduction of some more feet/musk action. May Noah’s domination grow over Liam at this brilliant slow pace!

I remember the debate this sites community had with AI just around the time the fifth chapter dropped. I was concerned that it would affect this series. I even said as such on the forum how there are great stories like yours that can use AI really well and where it clearly wasn't. As I've always been more neutral with the use of AI. If you are trying to endeavor in building up your own writing skills; then I definitely applaud it. But please don't feel pressured that you must step away from having AI assist in your series. For I stand by what I've said in comments previously. I was immersed and consumed into the story in ways that very few others on here can say. How those chapters explored the mutual journey of submission, control, and the emotions of those between the two characters. It was precise, yet charged with things unspoken between them with no filler. Just constant buildup and tension. It made me eager for them to keep going and see how their relationship and their bet progressed. This 'teaser' that you have has definitely portrayed a more personal touch to the story. And overall did a good job overall, keeping to the same pace as the previous chapters did. Your efforts to write the story yourself is clearly coming through. Yet if I may, I do need to ask about one thing. This is when Ethan installs that new programming. I have to ask if this is the 'proper' moment for this? Wouldn't this be more apt or appropriate after their bet has concluded? Granted, Alex has effectively lost already. And the reasoning could be chalked up to the same reasons Ethan removed the chastity. Yet it felt like Ethan's actions overtook the moment. How the act of this first and intimate moment was shadowed a bit by this. Even shortened. Or maybe that the point. And this will be explored more in the full release. Also, why have Ethan remove the suit? This is more of my own preferences coming through to be fair. If Ethan wanted to fuck Alex then why not remove everything, or at least the hood to see Alex? Alex wanted to go back into the suit as an act of needed submission. He wanted to be used and controlled in that manner. To be made an object. His programming correlates being a good boy as being a toy. A toy is best when objectified as the rubber allows. So the base question is does Ethan want to fuck Alex, or fuck his toy? Regardless, thank you for providing this teaser. For now I 'm really eager to read what happens in the morning.

So fucking hot dude. The smell and taste of your buds cock can be highly addictive. It can make you have wet dreams about burying your nose into his nuts breathing his musk in deep and licking up all his sweet precum. Liam is already hooked and doesn’t know it. He’s going to be such a good cocksucker for Noah.

🤤🤟

Fuck that’s hot. Add my hopes that we’ll see some more to this story. I think Dylan is a sneaky fucker with a plan all along and now he’s got Ethan by the balls now. The lucky shit.