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6/12/23, 4:59 AM
Of course! Can't wait!
Jun 9, 2023
6/12/23, 3:34 AM
I enjoyed this one a lot. There's a sweetness to it.
Anonymous
6/12/23, 2:10 AM
Great story
5/21/23, 2:50 AM
This was a lot of fun to read, if a touch disjoint at times, though I'm not sure that took much away from it. I really loved the idea of sexual exploration via subliminals, which would take role playing that one step further. Of course it's fantasy, but it's one I'd love to be real in a lot of ways too :-) and on the other hand am glad it's not, because my god, the potential for abuse.

6/11/23, 11:56 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks so much for these thoughts! Definitely a risk with adapting RP, that disjoint. Glad that you enjoyed it anyway!
6/11/23, 11:26 PM
@GoJia It's not just some random story; it's a story that appears in the first chapter of the _Zhuangzi_ and is a staple of Zhuangzian de-stabilizing and undermining norms. It seems like you haven't read the source material. @Blazargus Get well soon; it's no fun being in the hospital. The story still continues to move like Westworld, but Westworld definitely had the hosts defying the human control to the point that the tables got flipped and the hosts ended up controlling. So the whole making the AIs subserviant to the Piper is a big letdown in my mind. You definitely could have played the scenarios out in different ways.

6/11/23, 11:51 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) This 'ending' isn't the absolute ending for the setting. Originally I'd planned on progressing down a path like the one you're suggesting, but having had a rough time writing in recent weeks I decided on this ending for Kevin and Carter. The 'real' final act can happen later with a different main character, when I'm back on my feet (mentally speaking). As far as Kevin and Carter go, they aren't 'heroes'; their focus was on each other, that was their priority. Fighting back and turning the tables became less and less important to them as time progressed. Piper even 'wanted' Kevin to fight back, which complicates things for him. So, while this arc may not end satisfactorily for you, I hope the continuation that follows does.
6/11/23, 9:50 PM
Loving this story! Keep it up!
Anonymous
6/11/23, 8:43 PM
Great story! Loved it!!!!!
6/11/23, 10:21 AM
This was such a beautiful story. I could feel Matt’s anxiety and can remember feeling like that lately. Reading through and experiencing the scare and then relief and understanding and joy was a cathartic release. The sexiness helped a lot too :). I really enjoyed it and I hope there is more to come.

6/11/23, 8:18 PM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thank you so much. I really appreciate you sharing this with me. I'm so glad it offered some catharsis for you and you enjoyed the sexiness and story as a whole.
Kippers
6/11/23, 7:12 PM
I knew it would be the slut's best buddies who would be giving him his first meat fest, but I would have liked the reveal to come a bit sooner. Then they could feed his cocklust in further chapters, inviting their disbelieving friends to help flood him with cock in their garages. Such a hot scene, inviting a bunch of beer buddies over to use some hot pussy.
Jun 7, 2023
Anonymous
6/11/23, 6:43 PM
What an incredibly hot slow burn. If you write any more, I’d love to see more foot worship/ sweaty feet 😍