Recent Comments

6/10/23, 3:35 PM
My God, that's 20,000 words, and I've been coming to this site almost every day for two weeks eager for your updates. Thank you for writing such a great ending, I love this romantic story with an open ending! In your story, you mentioned the word "butterfly". There is a story in China called "Zhouzhuang Dream Butterfly", in which a man dreamed that he was a butterfly. After he woke up, he began to wonder whether his life was a butterfly dream or just he dreamed of butterfly. This is a story worth thinking about. Thanks again for your writing!And I'm a big fan of yours now :heart_eyes:

6/10/23, 11:44 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it through to the end! I'm sorry it took so long, I've been in hospital and in no state to write anything. I'm also really happy you got the Zhouzhuang reference :) I felt Piper was the sort of character who would allude to it, but not explain his reference. I'm happy to see it still shone through. Thanks again for your earnest support!

6/11/23, 7:24 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Are you ok? hope you recover soon

6/11/23, 9:35 AM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Just some really bad flu and the knock-on effects from that. Should be on the mend now :)
Leo
6/11/23, 9:31 AM
This is so hot! One of the best stories I’ve seen on here in a LONG TIME. Please hypnotize Brad and Chad’s dad!! We desperately need a daddy slave!
6/11/23, 6:44 AM
Hi guys! Thanks again for everyone who left a comment. Much appreciated! I have to prepare for a test so I don't know if I can spend time this week for the next chapter. It might come out near the end of the month. I normally don't like to address suggestions since it might spoil the next chapters, but here are some that I'd like to comment on. 1) I did consider turning Brad's home into the HQ for their porn operations, but given that Dexter is looking forward for a university life outside his home town, I think it is a bit out of character. Maybe there's another way they can be together wherever Dexter goes? 2) Dexter did not hypnotize Justin because he's the only person he considers his equal, and tampering with his will contradicts that. Justin still does not know how Dexter hypnotized those boys, he just knows they are hypnotized, so he doesn't really pose a threat yet. And a struggle-for-control type story sounds complicated. I would not attempt that on my first try. 3) Dexter's parents not having sex is not part of the original set of commands Brad was programmed with. It was added when Dexter saw that Brad's inclusion may cause some problems within the family. If, however, he was convinced that Brad having a threesome with his parents can be good for their marriage, he just might revoke that restriction. Is a threesome involving a straight woman and a still-straight man something the community even want?
6/11/23, 4:23 AM
So excited to see where this goes

6/11/23, 4:33 AM
@[Lusty Stallion](/user/show/10012213) You’ll either have to wait for my Patrons to vote when it gets posted here, or sign up for my Patreon. I’m still waiting for more of your work lol.
6/11/23, 3:55 AM
I know you probably won’t see this but can you pleeeeease do a sequel where Joey hypnotizes Danny? I love this story and need more!!!
6/11/23, 3:40 AM
Omg I’m loving this! Just joined and binged! Amazing
James
6/11/23, 2:37 AM
Damn, where's a werewolf when I want one.
Willie Cici
6/11/23, 1:52 AM
Loved this entire series! Keep writing and posting.

6/11/23, 2:16 AM
@Willie Cici Thanks, Willie! I appreciate you reading and leaving a comment like this.
6/10/23, 11:22 PM
Swimmy headed skippy. Yay. And i like that Oak, though hurt, recognizes that skippy needs care too. Cant wait to read the rest!
6/10/23, 10:47 PM
Super fun. Balancing the scare of not knowing what was happening with the happy ending was very satisfying.

6/10/23, 11:02 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) <3 Thank you so much. Himbos need a happy ending, they're so...wholesome isn't the right word. Thanks for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me.