Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/10/23, 5:41 AM
Amazing story. Hooked.
6/10/23, 4:28 AM
Absolutely excellent mix of perspective and kinks. Loved the level of mindfucked that Adam is subjected to. Please keep it up!
Kippers
6/10/23, 3:48 AM
Hot revenge story! It would be even better if we had a glimpse of his stripper gigs, and if he actually prostituted himself under the good doctor's direction. So hot thinking of him in various wardrobe, stripping it off on stage, and being so turned on by all the male attention. Then he could invite his best tippers to the back room, where they could show appreciation for his hot ass play with their stiff cocks.
Kippers
6/10/23, 2:51 AM
Hot revenge story! Very well written, and it kept me bone hard.
Jun 9, 2023
6/9/23, 3:07 PM
Nice! Fun and cute and great. Good story!

6/10/23, 2:10 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) thanks so much!
nycboot
4/27/18, 1:48 PM
Nice idea! I love how the situation you set up (white guy disliking black man) makes the (forced) sex even more hotter. It's wonderful to watch the guy slowly change his attitude. Thanks!

6/10/23, 1:37 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Right!, so hot n tantalizing
Roger
6/10/23, 12:29 AM
Just wanted to say I was a big fan of this series and I hope you have a chance to continue it some day :)
6/9/23, 11:32 PM
Wonderful!
6/9/23, 11:30 PM
Sorry, but this just... it doesn't make any _sense_. Things happen that were never set up (or directly contradict the previous chapter/paragraphs) — even basic, fundamental stuff like John (apparently) offering to give up his own muscle to Jack. That's **never explained** in the story, it's just suddenly what's happening out of nowhere. The procedure — which also starts out of nowhere, one second John and Jack are sitting in the waiting room, the next moment the transfer is already in progress — goes from being a muscle-transference process in chapter 1, to suddenly transferring attributes that have nothing to do with muscle, like bone density and height, in chapter 2. Having an AI generate a starting point for a story is fine, but a human editor still needs to check it for basic coherence afterwards.
6/9/23, 11:22 PM
Great story, and great writing. All I can say is that I still hope the older brothers would come to see themselves as their younger brother's fuck toys, and crave his dick, if not for its own sake, than at least for the pain/humiliation it inflicts on them.