Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/9/23, 10:43 PM
This is hot!! Please make the next chapter
6/8/23, 12:52 PM
Awesome story! Will there be further adventures of the four of them?

6/8/23, 1:12 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) If inspiration strikes. Haha. I'm totally open to suggestions, too.

6/8/23, 9:15 PM
@[Neiotik](/user/show/925823) How about an orgy as they explore their new bodies, but then pair them off into couples. You could later have a bunch of pirates try to raid the island for a hideout and have the merman slowly seduce the whole crew.

6/9/23, 12:35 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) Sounds awesome.

6/9/23, 6:22 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) I second that motion 🥰
Anonymous
6/9/23, 5:23 PM
Spectacular.....thank you !!
EJG
6/9/23, 5:15 PM
Hot little story.I second a hope 4 more.? What makes it hot is the vague air that in your reality,others (the tutor,perhaps the students?) seem to accept the poor lads slutty status as normal.
6/9/23, 4:23 PM
Seems to me Melissa did these two a huge favor --and the readers. I am loving this so much, and you are very good at the erotic pacing too!
6/6/23, 3:18 PM
Excellent episode!

6/9/23, 2:34 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you
Anonymous
6/9/23, 2:33 PM
I hope the story continues
Dec 25, 2018
DadTopper/Bearded Bard
6/9/23, 1:21 PM
This toy exists to be milked by daddy’s ass. If it makes a mess, it cleans it up. A responsible toy fucks like a real man and adapts to serve any kinks like any good toy should Sven awoke to wild grunts above him. The muscular hairy beast riding his fat cock was the daddy of his dreams. His white-silver hair and thick cropped white beard was slick with sweat. The epitome of masculinity rode Sven’s dick with abandon, tweaking his fatty pecs as his slight gut bounced. Sven grabbed the sides of the red jockstrap encasing his daddy’s fat ass, furiously pistoning in and out of his tight hole. All the while the voice in his head repeated “FUCK IT. FUCK IT. FUCK IT. FUCK IT.”
6/9/23, 1:09 PM
A wonderful slow burn story. Extremely hot!
Anonymous
6/8/23, 9:13 PM
As interesting as this was, this felt like it was written by an AI, especially the ending and lack of any dialogue. Try rewriting this but without using AI.

6/8/23, 9:36 PM
@Anonymous Hey, I didn't use AI to write that story, like I didn't use AI to write any of my stories. The lack of dialogues is only due to the fact that I'm not really good at writing interactions between the characters.

Martin
6/9/23, 7:47 AM
@Anonymous AIs in general have multiple dangers. One of them is that suddenly every creative output is evaluated and might be blamed to be AI generated. That's just not fair to anyone. I'm sure in a couple of months(!) no human(!) will be able to tell whether a creative work has been created by a human or AI anyway. Constructive criticism is always welcome, of course, but please consider that there is a human being (usually :laughing:) at the other end who has feelings and the only reason to write stories here is to give fun, joy and sexual release to other people. That's always something to appreciate!