Recent Comments

Roger
6/10/23, 12:29 AM
Just wanted to say I was a big fan of this series and I hope you have a chance to continue it some day :)
6/9/23, 11:32 PM
Wonderful!
6/9/23, 11:30 PM
Sorry, but this just... it doesn't make any _sense_. Things happen that were never set up (or directly contradict the previous chapter/paragraphs) — even basic, fundamental stuff like John (apparently) offering to give up his own muscle to Jack. That's **never explained** in the story, it's just suddenly what's happening out of nowhere. The procedure — which also starts out of nowhere, one second John and Jack are sitting in the waiting room, the next moment the transfer is already in progress — goes from being a muscle-transference process in chapter 1, to suddenly transferring attributes that have nothing to do with muscle, like bone density and height, in chapter 2. Having an AI generate a starting point for a story is fine, but a human editor still needs to check it for basic coherence afterwards.
6/9/23, 11:22 PM
Great story, and great writing. All I can say is that I still hope the older brothers would come to see themselves as their younger brother's fuck toys, and crave his dick, if not for its own sake, than at least for the pain/humiliation it inflicts on them.
Anonymous
6/9/23, 10:43 PM
This is hot!! Please make the next chapter
6/8/23, 12:52 PM
Awesome story! Will there be further adventures of the four of them?

6/8/23, 1:12 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) If inspiration strikes. Haha. I'm totally open to suggestions, too.

6/8/23, 9:15 PM
@[Neiotik](/user/show/925823) How about an orgy as they explore their new bodies, but then pair them off into couples. You could later have a bunch of pirates try to raid the island for a hideout and have the merman slowly seduce the whole crew.

6/9/23, 12:35 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) Sounds awesome.

6/9/23, 6:22 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) I second that motion 🥰
Anonymous
6/9/23, 5:23 PM
Spectacular.....thank you !!
EJG
6/9/23, 5:15 PM
Hot little story.I second a hope 4 more.? What makes it hot is the vague air that in your reality,others (the tutor,perhaps the students?) seem to accept the poor lads slutty status as normal.
6/9/23, 4:23 PM
Seems to me Melissa did these two a huge favor --and the readers. I am loving this so much, and you are very good at the erotic pacing too!
6/6/23, 3:18 PM
Excellent episode!

6/9/23, 2:34 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you