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6/9/23, 4:23 PM
Seems to me Melissa did these two a huge favor --and the readers. I am loving this so much, and you are very good at the erotic pacing too!
6/6/23, 3:18 PM
Excellent episode!

6/9/23, 2:34 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you
Anonymous
6/9/23, 2:33 PM
I hope the story continues
Dec 25, 2018
DadTopper/Bearded Bard
6/9/23, 1:21 PM
This toy exists to be milked by daddy’s ass. If it makes a mess, it cleans it up. A responsible toy fucks like a real man and adapts to serve any kinks like any good toy should Sven awoke to wild grunts above him. The muscular hairy beast riding his fat cock was the daddy of his dreams. His white-silver hair and thick cropped white beard was slick with sweat. The epitome of masculinity rode Sven’s dick with abandon, tweaking his fatty pecs as his slight gut bounced. Sven grabbed the sides of the red jockstrap encasing his daddy’s fat ass, furiously pistoning in and out of his tight hole. All the while the voice in his head repeated “FUCK IT. FUCK IT. FUCK IT. FUCK IT.”
6/9/23, 1:09 PM
A wonderful slow burn story. Extremely hot!
Anonymous
6/8/23, 9:13 PM
As interesting as this was, this felt like it was written by an AI, especially the ending and lack of any dialogue. Try rewriting this but without using AI.

6/8/23, 9:36 PM
@Anonymous Hey, I didn't use AI to write that story, like I didn't use AI to write any of my stories. The lack of dialogues is only due to the fact that I'm not really good at writing interactions between the characters.

Martin
6/9/23, 7:47 AM
@Anonymous AIs in general have multiple dangers. One of them is that suddenly every creative output is evaluated and might be blamed to be AI generated. That's just not fair to anyone. I'm sure in a couple of months(!) no human(!) will be able to tell whether a creative work has been created by a human or AI anyway. Constructive criticism is always welcome, of course, but please consider that there is a human being (usually :laughing:) at the other end who has feelings and the only reason to write stories here is to give fun, joy and sexual release to other people. That's always something to appreciate!
6/9/23, 5:41 AM
One of the better stories in this site. 2009... Not hold my breath for a sequel 🥺
6/9/23, 4:38 AM
Finally someone that writes merman stories, I love them. But I would love this more if you wrote more about the transformation
Fishboy
6/9/23, 4:22 AM
I am just loving these mermen stories! Please continue.
6/8/23, 2:35 PM
Poetic justice is having Jack become the fuck toy of Matt as Cal is of Billy

6/8/23, 6:21 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Whatever happens…Jake doesn’t get a sat

6/8/23, 6:38 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) Whatever happens…Jake doesn’t get a sat What doesn't Jake get?

6/8/23, 6:43 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) *say 😂. My bad

6/8/23, 6:51 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) Welcome to my club! So, Jake will emerge a a compliant slave. Frankly I hope Jake won't end up like his poor soul ex fuck buddy.

6/8/23, 6:54 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) We’ll have to see😈

6/8/23, 7:00 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) Thanks. You know I have positive feelings for Matt& would love to see Jake develop a positive feeling for him. You have left indication he has that in this chapter. In any case TY for extensive reponses they are much appreciated.

6/8/23, 7:02 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) You’re welcome 💜💜

6/8/23, 7:15 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) To some extent I hope he does. Personally, I'm all for slaves being in rubber. And seeing muscled jocks like Jake and Callum in rubber is one the hottest things.

6/8/23, 7:22 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I like my slaves naked & hairless! As to Callum, I wish he were more like Jake & not totally broken..But we all have our likes & I respect yours as well.

6/9/23, 1:17 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I definitely agree on the hairless part. It makes the body more 'open' for lack of a better word. And there is an appeal to being naked or mostly. Being how Matt is right now with a jockstrap works too depending on what you're going for. Maybe even a thong. Just add the collar and cage, maybe restraints and the slave is set.