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Anonymous
3/9/22, 4:39 AM
wow cada dia me sorprendes mas con tus historias son geniales šŸ’ŖšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ˜»

Anonymous
6/7/23, 5:54 AM
@Anonymous wow every day you surprise me more with your stories they are great < thats the translation
12/9/18, 10:01 AM
have you written this story on tumblr? i seemed to have read it somewhere before.

Anonymous
6/7/23, 5:52 AM
@Makingthingsbetter the first part is on tumblr but the other parts are'nt i hope you enjoy our day
6/7/23, 5:25 AM
This was a fun addition to the frat. Very clever play on the greased-up dick idea too.
6/7/23, 5:22 AM
This was really sweet. I really enjoyed it. The mind-messing and also the choice. Then to top it off, a lovely, wholesome ending.
6/3/23, 8:58 PM
As a cyclist (who chafes), this novel had an authenticity that I loved. There's nothing quite as erotic as a peloton preparing to ride, smearing their saddle pads with creamy lube and putting chapstick on their nipples. I'm hard before I ride every time! Great story!!!

6/6/23, 11:17 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks. And don't forget the guys who rub a big dollop of chamois butter down their crotch.

6/6/23, 11:27 PM
@[Charles](/user/show/133715) I said the same thing. (I’m one of those guys for centuries but not for short rides)
6/6/23, 11:25 PM
Loved lt
6/3/23, 11:45 AM
I SUBMITTED to reading this story the second I knew there was nipple play in it. And I wasn't disappointed. Well written. Just enough backstory. Interesting dynamic. My only complaint is that I want more. Oh, and love the cum eating as well.

6/6/23, 11:20 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you---very kind words.
Hank
6/3/23, 5:34 PM
The nipple massage was the hook for me. Then the slow gradual mind control was the reel. I found the story incredibly arousing. The blow job was very sensually written. I am extremely sorry the fuck was not included. I’m sure it would have been sensational. Thank you for an exciting read!

6/6/23, 11:20 PM
@Hank Thanks. And thanks for your gracious comments to my other stories. As for the scene that did not happen; well, some things are best left to the imagination. Or feel free to edit my story as desired and publish it.
6/6/23, 10:30 PM
That is the question: how far can he take it and not have it all implode? And when it does what will be left of any of them? Hopefully he can at least keep Adam and Jake.
6/6/23, 9:51 PM
I was waiting for more pup stories to pop up and this one did not disappoint, wish there was more on the pups rutting in the grass, would have been hot but not disappointed