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6/7/23, 5:22 AM
This was really sweet. I really enjoyed it. The mind-messing and also the choice. Then to top it off, a lovely, wholesome ending.
6/3/23, 8:58 PM
As a cyclist (who chafes), this novel had an authenticity that I loved. There's nothing quite as erotic as a peloton preparing to ride, smearing their saddle pads with creamy lube and putting chapstick on their nipples. I'm hard before I ride every time! Great story!!!

6/6/23, 11:17 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks. And don't forget the guys who rub a big dollop of chamois butter down their crotch.

6/6/23, 11:27 PM
@[Charles](/user/show/133715) I said the same thing. (I’m one of those guys for centuries but not for short rides)
6/6/23, 11:25 PM
Loved lt
6/3/23, 11:45 AM
I SUBMITTED to reading this story the second I knew there was nipple play in it. And I wasn't disappointed. Well written. Just enough backstory. Interesting dynamic. My only complaint is that I want more. Oh, and love the cum eating as well.

6/6/23, 11:20 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you---very kind words.
Hank
6/3/23, 5:34 PM
The nipple massage was the hook for me. Then the slow gradual mind control was the reel. I found the story incredibly arousing. The blow job was very sensually written. I am extremely sorry the fuck was not included. I’m sure it would have been sensational. Thank you for an exciting read!

6/6/23, 11:20 PM
@Hank Thanks. And thanks for your gracious comments to my other stories. As for the scene that did not happen; well, some things are best left to the imagination. Or feel free to edit my story as desired and publish it.
6/6/23, 10:30 PM
That is the question: how far can he take it and not have it all implode? And when it does what will be left of any of them? Hopefully he can at least keep Adam and Jake.
6/6/23, 9:51 PM
I was waiting for more pup stories to pop up and this one did not disappoint, wish there was more on the pups rutting in the grass, would have been hot but not disappointed
6/6/23, 9:13 PM
Very very hot. Too bad there wasn't some sex, maybe our main guy could Rim his good boys. But yeah sexy stuff, hot and sexy stuff. Such a great start!
6/6/23, 7:22 PM
amazing! wonderfull! i would like to be one of them.
Mindwinder
6/6/23, 5:22 PM
I'm eagerly awaiting the next one, but I have to concur with Rad Pits: giving the characters something to do (the precum leaking comp or whatever) while having the necessary exposition would have worked well and given the impression of the story moving along. Even then though, I'm enjoying the whole mindless helpless statue angle for Gary and Cole as they get groped and jerked and fingered by the nerds. The objectifying language there about describing their mindless, controlled states and their muscular bodies is pretty hot! Good stuff and keep up the good work!