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6/5/23, 6:54 PM
Is there any chance the coach will bring Brady's teammates?

6/6/23, 1:46 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Later - he's got to win a wrestling championship first lol
6/6/23, 1:18 AM
Oh this was hot. I like the ficking and the growing submission. Here's hoping to maybe some rimming. But yeah I like him producing cum and making them his. The dads becoming his too is hot too.
6/6/23, 12:59 AM
This chapter felt like a filler for me. There was a lot of exposition of Lennie wanting to dominate muscle jocks and reprogram their minds psychologically and all that but the story kinda just lingered there and didn’t go anywhere. I understand that it’s very important to establish character motivations, but I personally think this chapter would’ve been much stronger if the readers got to see Lennie actually flex the control he has over the jocks. Like, he brought up the thing about the precum contest, and then that didn’t lead to anything, which is kinda disappointing. Overall, I still have high hopes for this series, I think it has great potential, but sometimes I think constructive criticisms are necessary to help authors improve moving forward. Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter!
Flipper
6/5/23, 10:18 PM
This was hot but how do they leave the bed? They don’t have legs any more! Lawks.

6/6/23, 12:20 AM
@Flipper Let's say they phone a friend to help them to some water and then proceed to fuck his brains out? And a pod begins to form. ;)
Anonymous
6/6/23, 12:12 AM
I wish there are some mind control in the family. For example, a mind control dad to be forget who they are.
Anonymous
6/5/23, 11:18 PM
I NEED more of this. One of the hottest stories on here for me. Great writing and premise and i really enjoy the characters as well as their interations, sexy kinky and otherwise
Apr 2, 2011
6/5/23, 10:29 PM
I am so in love with gay sissy stories. Such a total turn on for me anymore. Thinking I need to be a slut n suck me some cock n get fuc'd. Giggles
6/5/23, 10:19 PM
Good start
6/5/23, 10:04 PM
Oh, Brody, you are going to be owned forever. Great chapter.
6/5/23, 9:37 PM
You're definitely a huge fan of webb025 (so am I!)...I can see the resemblance to his style. But that's ok, we all got to start from something as a reference...it's been a while since we've had some similar styles of stories, so I'm happy to see a new story. It's a good start and I look forward to more of this!