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6/5/23, 12:21 AM
This was definitely a great start but I wish there was more. Looking forward to the next part. Really awesome job!
6/4/23, 11:02 PM
Wow! I didn’t know webb025 has this story. Thanks for uploading it.
6/4/23, 10:56 PM
Pretty good for a first story! I’m looking forward to seeing the rest :)
6/4/23, 10:38 PM
Hi. There’s a big sub small top tag around here. This is definitely an amazing start!
5/28/23, 6:37 PM
Before I ever read a story the summery reals me in. A good story catching snip bit can really draw people in. So instead of you introducing yourself as a new writer, say something about your story and the characters in it. Your introduction can go right before the story begins inside a few (of these). That way people know it’s not about the story. That’s one way or another way is a line under your introduction to break it from the rest of the story. Here’s an example of one I did something like what I’m saying. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006069

6/4/23, 7:29 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you for your feedback. I didnt realize as I was filling out the submission form that what I put there would end up as the intro displayed. I will look into adjusting it.

6/4/23, 10:37 PM
@[Bowtied boy Jason](/user/show/255330) Sure no problem! I believe that you got something here that could get more traffic.
6/4/23, 9:08 PM
Oh, this was so well done. Though I always leave these stories feeling the wronged, vengeful girls have accidentally done these assholes a huge favor.
6/4/23, 6:37 PM
Small top + big sub, a banger right here!
6/4/23, 6:36 PM
So who is this Donny, and where did he come from. What’s his backstory?
6/2/23, 9:50 PM
Great start. I love when guys just do what they are told.

thesaxcat
6/4/23, 6:23 PM
@[Clinton J](/user/show/2616233) Same!
6/2/23, 11:02 PM
Nice start! Looking forward to a story with a dominant pov guy. I hopes he's a top too.so him wanting his brother to be better is great, helpful masters are great. So yeah this was great, looking forward to more.

thesaxcat
6/4/23, 6:23 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, I enjoy seeing a Master do good things for those they control in these situations.