Recent Comments

slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/3/23, 11:42 PM
Excellent start! Love horny teenagers as the Masters of fully controlled men.
6/1/23, 4:22 PM
I loved the story but it MUST continue. It is just a start. If not it will be just another good story not a memorable one, And, of course, the two main character have to unite as a team with Kenneth & Thad.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:59 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thankfully, we still have a little bit left to go. We shall see how it all turns out! :smiley:
6/3/23, 10:58 PM
great!
6/3/23, 2:00 PM
This was a hot set of sex scenes, and I’m glad Papi got to unload in Thad’s ass after all; Kenneth stealing that cumshot was positively wicked! I also understand why Papi is reconsidering—this situation was incredibly stressful, I’m sure, and no one should have to walk around with a career-destroying secret on their shoulders all the time. I appreciate that he’s seriously thinking about it.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:55 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) As always, thank you for the kind words Soren. It's been a tizzy trying to balance the seriousness of the situation with the sex scenes and lightheartedness of it all, so I'm glad some are enjoying all aspects of the story!
6/3/23, 9:54 PM
Personally I like it very much. I love smaller and physically weaker dominants and you described both sides, controlled and controller. To make it more consistent and easier to read, try to keep POV in the same person, I don't mean all the time Garry or whatever but either 3rd pov or 1st pov. There was a switch in-between with pov which was a little confusing but overall great job. Love the story so far and can't wait for more.
Hank
6/3/23, 8:51 PM
You have refined the story … the physical action is much more intense and arousing. You are a wonderfully creative writer with a gift for descriptive prose. Thank you for an explosive read. I hope you continue writing. WBLSO@aol.com
Hank.
6/3/23, 6:35 PM
OMG … this story was incredibly written. You descriptions of the feelings, emotions, and physical fuck were unbelievably intense. Your mind is sensationally creative. You, Sir, are sexy, sensual, and hot! Thank you for these unique stories! (WBLSO@aol.com)
Hank
6/3/23, 5:59 PM
An excellent read. You are a talented writer. I am fascinated by erotic hypnosis and truly wish to submit to a dominate hypnotist. The concept of control is intensely arousing.
6/3/23, 5:49 PM
It's great to see a Chinese writer here. Please keep up the good work.
BCG
6/3/23, 5:17 PM
Like astrologus, i read it the minute is saw it included nipple play. My hands only came off my nipples in order to scroll down. Well done!