Recent Comments

6/4/23, 5:21 AM
Definitely a fan! Please continue!
6/4/23, 3:59 AM
Very hot, love this!
Anonymous
6/4/23, 3:45 AM
Yes, it is worth continuing, so please continue!
6/4/23, 3:36 AM
So hot! Glad to know there's a method to his madness, and a reason for the delay!
DWK
6/4/23, 3:02 AM
Looking forward to more. Great idea.
6/4/23, 1:34 AM
Seems like a fun premise! Would be curious to see where this goes. One constructive criticism piece I would suggest is to the time skips seems a bit hard to follow, without clear indicators (either date stamps or a mention in the narrative). I'd recommend keeping thr story generally linear or adding more clarity in future chapters :)
Hank
6/4/23, 1:28 AM
Sir, your ploy, story line, & character development were spot on. Your writing superb. Love the control aspects. Frankly, I would give my eye teeth to meet and be seduced by Matt I could feel myself submitting to Matt as I read the story. Keep writing this series it is incredibly arousing and orgasmic. WBLSO@aol.com
6/4/23, 12:32 AM
Great start there @Thesaxcat. I so am ready for chapters 2 and 3. Love how you can tell the relationship and also a supportive but dominate top in the making, maybe even a power bottom that knows how to take control and make a guy him what he wants.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/3/23, 11:42 PM
Excellent start! Love horny teenagers as the Masters of fully controlled men.
6/1/23, 4:22 PM
I loved the story but it MUST continue. It is just a start. If not it will be just another good story not a memorable one, And, of course, the two main character have to unite as a team with Kenneth & Thad.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:59 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thankfully, we still have a little bit left to go. We shall see how it all turns out! :smiley: