Recent Comments

6/3/23, 4:40 PM
Wow! Just found this story. It's incredible. Didn't realize this type of premise would be so hot!! Cannot wait to see what happens next. Thank you Elmara for introducing me to the world of dumb jocks :)
6/2/23, 8:29 PM
An amazingly tender story, which was so unexpected and delightful. Beautifully written. Many thanks.

CasualWanderer82
6/3/23, 8:45 AM
@[fredtaylor](/user/show/988150) Thank you for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the ride! See you on the next one!
6/3/23, 8:38 AM
Another great story from one of my favorite writers. No one describes corruption and downfall (and triumph) quite like MalSkin! Thank you!
6/3/23, 6:24 AM
Wow! Somehow, this has become my favorite WIP! It’s so hot! I can’t wait to see what’s next and I am really excited to see Stephen recruited next! I love that the wrestling team is controlled by Ryan. I’d love the whole school to be controlled by him! Hell, I’d like to be controlled by him!
Anonymous
8/16/16, 6:27 AM
Woulda been hotter if they were white

Anonymous
6/3/23, 5:26 AM
@Anonymous Boyyy shut yo stankey ass mouth
6/3/23, 5:18 AM
I believe this is my first comment after years of lurking. I just want to seriously applaud you on how amazing this story is. The were multiple points where the plot and characterization fully immersed me - sometimes even distracting me from how HOT the action actually was. I was so drawn into Freddy's character in particular, so connected to his struggle and genuinely fearing for him near the end chapters. Incredible job; probably my all-time favorite story on here.
6/3/23, 5:10 AM
Not me, found the image online.Have asked around but no one know where it is from.
6/3/23, 2:50 AM
This made me fuckin cum right on cue at the end. LOL. Really good story.
6/3/23, 1:57 AM
I was definitely going to point out some of the problems with the story, but I thought just let it flow and see where it goes. I'm glad I did; I truly enjoyed this. The scenes with the group of prospects hard and cumming were definitely hot!!! I saw a lot of things I could learn to incorporate into my own writing. Looking forward to seeing where you go, especially now that you've put Stephen and his information about what's happening to Ethan out there.
6/3/23, 12:38 AM
Lovely story. 😍