I'd love to join rob as one of brutes slaves

INCREDIBLY erotic, cannot stop reading (and wink wink nudge nudge)

The work-out scene and the bondage that follows it were exceptional pieces of writing. There was plenty of detail which gave it an aura of authenticity, yet the reader does not get distracted by the details. The character development for Marcus and Stanley moves ahead -- relentlessly. I am in awe of your skills, Puff. And I am a sucker for an S/M author who takes time to describe how things smell. Your work smells more than most. ;-) Now as to the issue of the morality of Marcus, our main character, I am not as distressed by him as are some readers. Somehow I never was. (Maybe its my sadistic side coming out.) There is no more malignant behavior in Marcus than there is in an average antagonist in a "Law and Order" or "The Blacklist" episode. Of course, we have to assume that this is being read by a reasonably discerning adult audience -- just like we do with a TV later night program. Every chapter reveals some small trait of Marcus' personality, which makes him like most humans -- a mystery both fascinating and terrible. I'd like to know if Marcus is an alter-ego for you Puff, or a combination of men you have known (or want to know) in real life? Whoever he may be, I have always sensed that there is something quite likable about him. I'd like to hang out with Marcus if he were a real guy and rummage around with him in the dark corners of my fantasies. Puff, I know that you are not telling us everything about Marcus for reasons that you have chosen to uncover only in small pieces. I wait for a revelation that shows him to be better than he appears. Proof of my intuition here stems from the deep seated friendship that Stanley exhibits toward him, time and time again. While evil is attractive, here's a case where Stanley is somehow not converted to evil when he is with Marcus. Hypnotism and "Moth to the Flame" do not seem to be adequate explanations. Beside the obvious benefits of friendship, both men are changing each other in ways that helps them grow into a deep and weird love. Can't think of too many other stories of this genre that are driven by such a well articulated character progression.

Love a good muscular transformation and age regression.

Sweet

I’ve reread this already at least 3 times. Unsurprising to anyone who has read my comments on previous chapters, I love it. This is definitely one of my all time favorite stories. The characterization is excellent, and that is what makes the hot scenes hot. My attachment to Freddy made his changes and all of the sex he and Uri had in every chapter so much hotter. When I was first started reading it and realized that Freddy was going to lose all of his muscle, I was a little bit disappointed. In the back of my head, I was expecting to not find the story as hot. I loved muscled up alpha Freddy. I found him incredibly hot. But then, as I read the changes between Freddy and Bryant, it just got hotter and hotter for me. And the story ending for Freddy made me excited at the possibility of him being what he was again, when he wants to. The last chapter here is excellent. A previous comment about Uri not getting punished and getting what he wanted really solidified how I feel about it: this is a really well-written story. People don’t always get what they deserve. The story, as Uri complains about, is about Freddy, and Freddy ends up in a pretty good place. He gets to explore the gay side of being bi, which he’s never done before the stuff with Uri, he gets to experience all of the subby bottom goodness he’s been craving, and he’s got Bryant there who seems much more sane and less self-centered than Uri, and will likely be happy with Freddy exploring being a big muscled up stud again. I love Bryant. I love that I know little about him and he still has some depth. I loved his reaction to Freddy’s wish. That he was so naked to Freddy. And that he was embarrassed and needed the pheromones to give him permission to do what he wanted to do. I’m interested to see if he’s angry at Freddy once they take a few seconds to breath. I’d forgotten about the wish about fucking Uri’s throat and found it particularly hot when it hit Bryant about Freddy. I love that Freddy made a stupid wish. Like he’s been doing all along. And then regretted it in the morning and tried to stop it. That was some awesome tension thrown in. It was totally unnecessary and it added so much to create some tension. I am very curious now thinking about how the 3 characters will interact. Will Bryant still like Uri after he’s been around him for more than 2 minutes? Will he confront his own desires? Will be blame his actions on the pheromones? These are all great things to have left me with. Hats off to Nutiper for writing such an amazing story. Thank you very much for finishing this and making it look so easy to blend character depth and eroticism. It’s been a fantastic ride.

It was excellent nonetheless!

I immediately noticed the nod to Baralai's universe, and thought it did it justice. Nicely done! (Though the uncomfortableness with humiliation shows a bit :-) )

Nice twist at the end.

Great as always. So it seems The Chairman is some sort of either supernatural being or alien with some mind control (blue liquid) tech. Mitch never had a chance. Can’t wait to see how he will use Mitch’s mind hack knowledge for his nefarious plans.