Recent Comments

6/1/23, 10:12 AM
Jack, your imagination knows no bound & is expertly reflected in your writing. I know Donny is the latest creation of Lex but is there a possibility he can overtake his creator. A related question, is there some one or something that challenge and defeat Lex?
Lampshade15
6/1/23, 9:28 AM
I got thrills when I saw you had posted another story and it didn't disappoint. It was a really hot read! Who doesn't love a commanding daddy putting needy boys in their place?
6/1/23, 7:07 AM
The persona of Markus and Stanley are not just one dimensional, they exhibit layers of complex emotions. That kind of exposition is rare on this site. Nice writing, Puff.
S HIV ERS
6/1/23, 6:21 AM
ALMOST PERFECT. GOT ME HARD AFTER A HUGE SLAM. PLEASE ADD SOME PART WHERE THIS MUTANT GOD SHOWS US WHAT BUGS DO TO HIS ALREADY UNBEATABLE DNA. COULD CREATE REAL MUTATIONS, A KIND OF X-MEN MALE ENTIRE SOCIETY BASED EXCLUSIVELY ON LUST AND SHARING FLUIDS SO THAT WE DO NOT ONLY GROW,BUT BECOME THE ULTIMATE PERV SOCIETY
6/1/23, 6:15 AM
I have the sense that we are under the spell of a masterful writer, who carefully lays out his characters and story line in a very meticulous way.
6/1/23, 5:54 AM
I loved this chapter so much. Simple and efective. A bit disapointed because professor Ware don't appear enough but I liked professor Lin. I think Jerod becoming lazy, can be dangerous for him.
6/1/23, 5:50 AM
Hoping our psyco poindexter taking Cody to himself in next chapter!
6/1/23, 5:08 AM
As always, stuck the landing. What a sweet, exciting, and maybe even empowering ending for an excellent series. The rubber band stuff really took it to the next level. Thanks for all the work and creativity you invested into this series, you continue to raise the bar for the quality of work on this site.
5/31/23, 10:12 PM
Really really good! I liked the bookend structure instead of a straight-forward start-finish. Hot imagery. Wish you'd gone a step further and told us of a tool or invention the scientist created in the thrall of the chairman, to help him as he'd stated. Would've been a nice little cherry on top. GREAT STORY

6/1/23, 3:01 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Stay Tuned. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
6/1/23, 2:22 AM
Thanks for this story! I really enjoyed the ride that you brought us on (and the rides we got to read 😁). This chapter was such a fun turnabout, too. I love how in-the-moment and into Freddy's experience you were able to bring us in this chapter. Congratulations on making it to the finish line!