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6/1/23, 2:38 PM
Great as always. So it seems The Chairman is some sort of either supernatural being or alien with some mind control (blue liquid) tech. Mitch never had a chance. Can’t wait to see how he will use Mitch’s mind hack knowledge for his nefarious plans.
easdf
6/1/23, 1:46 PM
Oof I'm torn. On the one hand the story was hot af. I'm a sucker (no pun intended) for dirty talk, and this was some grade A dirty talk. On the other, the narrator is basically a villain and a douchebag for no justified reason. It is just id and betrayal. Never the less, the fact that I'm still thinking about this, days after I stumbled upon this story (and reading it multiple times) just shows how good of a writer you are!
6/1/23, 1:22 PM
You always leave me anxious for the next installment. Jack is a genius.
6/1/23, 10:12 AM
Jack, your imagination knows no bound & is expertly reflected in your writing. I know Donny is the latest creation of Lex but is there a possibility he can overtake his creator. A related question, is there some one or something that challenge and defeat Lex?
Lampshade15
6/1/23, 9:28 AM
I got thrills when I saw you had posted another story and it didn't disappoint. It was a really hot read! Who doesn't love a commanding daddy putting needy boys in their place?
6/1/23, 7:07 AM
The persona of Markus and Stanley are not just one dimensional, they exhibit layers of complex emotions. That kind of exposition is rare on this site. Nice writing, Puff.
S HIV ERS
6/1/23, 6:21 AM
ALMOST PERFECT. GOT ME HARD AFTER A HUGE SLAM. PLEASE ADD SOME PART WHERE THIS MUTANT GOD SHOWS US WHAT BUGS DO TO HIS ALREADY UNBEATABLE DNA. COULD CREATE REAL MUTATIONS, A KIND OF X-MEN MALE ENTIRE SOCIETY BASED EXCLUSIVELY ON LUST AND SHARING FLUIDS SO THAT WE DO NOT ONLY GROW,BUT BECOME THE ULTIMATE PERV SOCIETY
6/1/23, 6:15 AM
I have the sense that we are under the spell of a masterful writer, who carefully lays out his characters and story line in a very meticulous way.
6/1/23, 5:54 AM
I loved this chapter so much. Simple and efective. A bit disapointed because professor Ware don't appear enough but I liked professor Lin. I think Jerod becoming lazy, can be dangerous for him.
6/1/23, 5:50 AM
Hoping our psyco poindexter taking Cody to himself in next chapter!