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5/31/23, 3:52 PM
Absolutely fantastic sign me up šŸ˜
5/31/23, 2:05 PM
I get it's not ok but I would have liked to see Skippy try to explain himself. He is a very sheltered homophobic person at the start and that might be the only term he go l could know and also didn't think it was wrong to pry. Still get punished but could have tried to talk his way out of it. I still love the progression on the story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
5/31/23, 11:06 AM
This is such a great, hot story, but my god the typos can take you out of it.
5/31/23, 8:43 AM
Yeah, a slow build, but a good one. You're sucking me into the characters and story line.
5/31/23, 7:33 AM
I like this series! Would love to see more public humiliation, too, but the findom stuff is hot. The end "got me" ;)
Anonymous
5/31/23, 7:10 AM
Will there ever be a similar series based on Hungarian? Btw this was so Hot and Sexy
5/31/23, 5:55 AM
I'm glad to see this series keep going on.
5/30/23, 1:13 AM
will there be another chapter?

5/31/23, 3:33 AM
@[midwest_hypnosis](/user/show/925698) Yes. On the back burner for now but I’m thinking about this story a lot
HypnoMuttHero
5/31/23, 2:30 AM
Stunning from start to finish. Can't say enough good things about the story and your prowess as a writer. You've drawn a rich universe of characters here, and I'm not eager to see them go... Thank you so much.
5/31/23, 1:23 AM
Before anything, I want to say that last chapter was really amazing! I was working up a comment for it but didn't get around to making it because I figured I had at least a month before the next update. It honestly gave me vibes reading it that I hadn't felt since first getting into reading MC fiction. That said, you can definitely tell this was a preplanned ending. I wouldn't go so far as to call it disjointed because it still flows pretty well but it definitely feels like their a disconnect between this chapter and the last one, especially in the relationship between Uri and Freddy. Like, it feels really weird for Freddy to just suddenly realize he's never going to get through to Uri after Uri just basically tried to completely change him into his personal dom top boytoy against his will. The last wish in general feels like it's downplayed after how darkly it was played last chapter, I'm not that surprised that Freddy was able to free himself more easily than he realized but while Bryant probably likes it way more than Freddy did it definitely feels weird that Freddy isn't at least a little concerned about what he did to Bryant or that he thinks about how he did a pretty good job as a dom top. I still really liked the series overall and I definitely understand how when you have an ending in mind it can be really hard to match things up when the story starts moving in more or different directions than your initial plans (and this one is especially impressively long) but this little wrinkle does color the ending for me at least a little. I'm excited to see whatever it is you work on next. Thank you for sharing this story with us over this past year!