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Anonymous
5/31/23, 7:10 AM
Will there ever be a similar series based on Hungarian? Btw this was so Hot and Sexy
5/31/23, 5:55 AM
I'm glad to see this series keep going on.
5/30/23, 1:13 AM
will there be another chapter?

5/31/23, 3:33 AM
@[midwest_hypnosis](/user/show/925698) Yes. On the back burner for now but I’m thinking about this story a lot
HypnoMuttHero
5/31/23, 2:30 AM
Stunning from start to finish. Can't say enough good things about the story and your prowess as a writer. You've drawn a rich universe of characters here, and I'm not eager to see them go... Thank you so much.
5/31/23, 1:23 AM
Before anything, I want to say that last chapter was really amazing! I was working up a comment for it but didn't get around to making it because I figured I had at least a month before the next update. It honestly gave me vibes reading it that I hadn't felt since first getting into reading MC fiction. That said, you can definitely tell this was a preplanned ending. I wouldn't go so far as to call it disjointed because it still flows pretty well but it definitely feels like their a disconnect between this chapter and the last one, especially in the relationship between Uri and Freddy. Like, it feels really weird for Freddy to just suddenly realize he's never going to get through to Uri after Uri just basically tried to completely change him into his personal dom top boytoy against his will. The last wish in general feels like it's downplayed after how darkly it was played last chapter, I'm not that surprised that Freddy was able to free himself more easily than he realized but while Bryant probably likes it way more than Freddy did it definitely feels weird that Freddy isn't at least a little concerned about what he did to Bryant or that he thinks about how he did a pretty good job as a dom top. I still really liked the series overall and I definitely understand how when you have an ending in mind it can be really hard to match things up when the story starts moving in more or different directions than your initial plans (and this one is especially impressively long) but this little wrinkle does color the ending for me at least a little. I'm excited to see whatever it is you work on next. Thank you for sharing this story with us over this past year!
May 12, 2018
5/31/23, 12:25 AM
Like omg, I can never get enough of this story. So turns me on, on so many ways
5/30/23, 11:51 PM
Loved the story Also, wanna admit, totally fell for those false links..
TimLeaf
5/29/23, 3:20 PM
Hey everyone, Thank you for reading / rating my story. That's supposed to be the first part of a serie, let me know if I should write a part 2 of this serie :) .

Anonymous
5/30/23, 10:55 PM
@[TimLeaf](/user/show/10013470) It's great, can't wait for Part 2, although I hope u don't make him turn into a pig, maybe some size loss, orgasm control/denial
5/30/23, 9:46 PM
Another great chapter! Hope there’s more to come!
5/30/23, 2:19 AM
Matt is definitely smarter than he lets on. And if (more like when) he plays his cards right with this hunt, Jake is going to be bound to him on several levels. And the looming threat of what Billy would do to him is going to play right into Matt's hands.

5/30/23, 3:36 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) That’s an interesting theory…we’ll have to see!

5/30/23, 9:28 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) It would be a great way to cement their 'relationship'. Or maybe he will come to rescue if another hunter gets him. But I might be just as wrong. Maybe somehow Billy and Callum will catch him. The idea of permanent chastity for a slave is a hot one. Maybe even Jake will experience what its like being rubber slave. And thank you btw for being so consistent in publishing your chapters. This is really appreciated.