Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/28/23, 10:33 PM
I love it and can't wait to see more from you. (hopefully another chapter?)

5/29/23, 1:30 PM
@Anonymous I am considering doing chapter 3 with Brock the jock. Even if I don’t do that, something else is in the works.
Anonymous
5/29/23, 12:29 PM
loved the flip... lucky charlie!!!
5/29/23, 12:23 PM
Jack, you will always be the center of attention, in real life and in the stories on Gay Spiral.
5/13/23, 3:31 AM
❤️❤️❤️❤️

5/29/23, 11:51 AM
@[raleighleathersir](/user/show/924259) Please check your email Sir. You should have a message from me. It most likely went into a spam folder. Most humbly yours, Matt
5/29/23, 11:09 AM
Incredible
Anonymous
5/29/23, 7:04 AM
I agree with @Reader and @Mind Labyrinth that Titan's punishment in this chapter is heavy-handed. It also demonstrates Titan's lack of understanding of the situation and his presumption that Skippy said a bad word out of spite, which wasn't the case. Skippy spoke out of ignorance, which makes the punishment and its severity come across as being both mean-spirited and vengeful instead of trying to help Skippy become a better human being and a part of the pack. Thus, the punishment is counterproductive and it draws the pack's attention to Skippy's past and away from the the progress that he's made. This bring Titan's leadership abilities into question because my sympathy in this chapter is solely for Skippy. To be punished so severely while not necessarily understanding why could make Skippy feel that he's unredeemable and will never be accepted by the pack. It could also make him fearful of saying or doing anything. As far as Oak goes, if he's crying simply because he was called a name (out of ignorance), that strikes me as not only being incredibly weak, it also demonstrates his inability to find any inner strength to overcome his own past, which also doesn't bode well for Titan's leadership abilities.

5/29/23, 7:32 AM
@Anonymous My dude. Crying because your upset or hurt is not weakness. It’s coping. And no matter how much you think your over something or have strength against it. Sometimes that does not matter a gold plated fart when you get slapped in the proverbial face by the same shit that nearly drove you to the brink. I do understand the rest of your concerns as well as others, however, and will take them under advisement.

Anonymous
5/29/23, 10:21 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) I am a person with gender issues and have wrestled with it. You do never get over it. I have a friend, matter of fact my closest friend since 4th grade who has transitioned, and know that she has nothing to do with her past because of the fear of non-acceptance. So with a transperson that is always with them and then to be called a name that was usually flung at them, yes you would tend to cry. I hope this helps, I remember I was so different from boys growing up that I was called a fag at age three and yes it still hurts all these years later.
5/29/23, 9:26 AM
Jack, just read for the first time full series. Awesome stories & up to your usual high standard of writing & imagination!
Anonymous
5/29/23, 7:49 AM
Great story. I hope that you keep it going.
5/19/23, 4:12 PM
Thank you everyone for your patience while I was on hiatus this past 5 months. Starting in June, my goal is to post a new chapter on the 1st and 15th of each month.

5/29/23, 5:31 AM
@[Mithrasity](/user/show/918043) Amazing, can’t wait!
5/29/23, 3:33 AM
Good job on the ending here. As a sucker for muscle growth i was sad Freddy was shrunk down and really enjoyed the implication that he'd be able to explore that in the future. Really like how you wrote and characterized Bryant, basically speed running him thorough a whole story of character development in one chapter, while still making it meaningful and clear what was happenning. The way everything resolved with Uri was perfect. Him saying that this was HIS story, was just such a good moment, especially for a story on this site, where he'd often be right. He could easily have been the main character/ protagonist, stripping Freddy of all of his agency and turning him into a Sex toy to make Uri feel validated. And even though he got EXACTLY what he wanted when Bryant became huge, that wasn't good enough for him, because it wasn't how he wanted it. He couldnt view other people as PEOPLE and not just characters in a story about himself. I think because of that, the story needed a "happy" ending where Freddy had some way to escape. Otherwise it would miss the point not only about Freddy's self discovery, but Uri being given one last chance to find actual happiness and growth. While i think the story could have been shorter (definitely not four chapters though), this and the last Chapter did a really good job of paying off all that set up and making it work for me. There's plenty more i could say about all of this, but I'll just sum it up with Great job.