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5/29/23, 9:26 AM
Jack, just read for the first time full series. Awesome stories & up to your usual high standard of writing & imagination!
Anonymous
5/29/23, 7:49 AM
Great story. I hope that you keep it going.
5/19/23, 4:12 PM
Thank you everyone for your patience while I was on hiatus this past 5 months. Starting in June, my goal is to post a new chapter on the 1st and 15th of each month.

5/29/23, 5:31 AM
@[Mithrasity](/user/show/918043) Amazing, can’t wait!
5/29/23, 3:33 AM
Good job on the ending here. As a sucker for muscle growth i was sad Freddy was shrunk down and really enjoyed the implication that he'd be able to explore that in the future. Really like how you wrote and characterized Bryant, basically speed running him thorough a whole story of character development in one chapter, while still making it meaningful and clear what was happenning. The way everything resolved with Uri was perfect. Him saying that this was HIS story, was just such a good moment, especially for a story on this site, where he'd often be right. He could easily have been the main character/ protagonist, stripping Freddy of all of his agency and turning him into a Sex toy to make Uri feel validated. And even though he got EXACTLY what he wanted when Bryant became huge, that wasn't good enough for him, because it wasn't how he wanted it. He couldnt view other people as PEOPLE and not just characters in a story about himself. I think because of that, the story needed a "happy" ending where Freddy had some way to escape. Otherwise it would miss the point not only about Freddy's self discovery, but Uri being given one last chance to find actual happiness and growth. While i think the story could have been shorter (definitely not four chapters though), this and the last Chapter did a really good job of paying off all that set up and making it work for me. There's plenty more i could say about all of this, but I'll just sum it up with Great job.
5/21/23, 11:49 PM
Damn, this whole series has been AMAZING!! Love to see what more writing you have in store, as well as if the series will continue. super hot my friend 🤗

5/29/23, 1:23 AM
@[CaperClear](/user/show/10020405) Thank you, I’m glad you’ve enjoyed this story. 😁 I’m not going to say this series is over, but I don’t know when I’ll get back to it. Sorry for commenting so late, lot of pieces moving around in personal life.

5/29/23, 3:27 AM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) No worries at all! Life happens haha. And i totally understand about the series. Regardless, I look forward to your future works 😁
5/29/23, 3:14 AM
i also think that Skippy's punishment is a little heavy for this offense, but from the overall context of the story i SORT OF understand where Titan is coming from. Skippy is a Grade A asshole across the board, he's intolerant, uses slurs without regard or knowledge of how wrong his language is, and he was a menace and this is a zero tolerance corrective regimen he's been placed in. However, Skippy wasn't TRYING to be bad, so that's why a lot of us are like, "Can't he get a stern lecture and a warning?!?!" as opposed to when he would use the F slur or tell one of the pack to fuck off. he obviously wasn't trying to hurt Oak, he just didn't know the right language to use. Obviously Titan isn't going to let him plead his case and Oak is basically retraumatized right now, but as the audience we feel just a little sorry for Skippy. personally i am very glad that he isn't getting his butt whooped or other physically intense punishment, but the butt zapper is kinda bad tho. The hypno chair isn't as bad as i was worried about. but i definitely still feel like Skippy as omega didn't get the chance to plead his case of ignorance. He's been trying to be good, even if he's not entirely sure how. perhaps Titan, after hearing Skippy's side later can apologize for giving a heavier punishment than Skippy earned at the time, even if that step was going to be taken at some point in his retraining anyways? all this to say that this is a REALLY WELL WRITTEN STORY because we're ALL up in arms for justice for skippy. which just means that you've written him so well that we see this very strongly from his point of view, and we empathize with him heavily. Excellent job. Cannot WAIT for the next chapter of "Zonked out pup Skippy"!
Kippers
5/29/23, 1:53 AM
ScheheraZaid seems to know what he's doing! I look forward to finding out if Sal has an underlying motive for discovering Master Rod's techniques, and if Zaid can escape the madness of being the unwilling cunt of two hypnotists.
5/29/23, 12:20 AM
I love this story so fucking much. One of my favorites EVER. You’re an amazing writer and I honestly feel privileged I get to read something like this. Everything I love in just one place!!! Now I really can’t wait to see Eddy’s chapter, and by the way, all the Opportunists so far were hung tops, now you really need to have the next ones coming up be slutty bottoms who have fun with the dumb jock clients huge dongs hahaha cheers man!

Ash
5/29/23, 1:17 AM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much for reading. I’m glad you’re enjoying my stories as much as I enjoyed writing them. My next chapter will be exactly what you’re looking for. There’ll be tons of “huge dongs”. Never enough for a slutty bottom of course, but enough to keep him content. :wink:
5/29/23, 1:08 AM
Soooo hot! While I love the way you wrote this happy ending, especially with such a message that gives us hope that 100% dom tops are out there ;P, I do love unhappy endings. My pitch for an alternative ending is that it turns out, even stronger than the bottom love they have, it actually turns out that more of a trauma bond would make Freddy and Uri even closer. And so Bryant makes some wishes, forcing Freddy and Uri not to resist their permanent new roles, and because I'm a sucker for cock shrink, shrink their cocks too. And so Freddy doesn't get to act out his switch fantasies that are alluded to possibly coming true in the future. Anyway, overwhelming positive vibes from me. I looked forward all day to getting home, getting high, and jacking to this new chapter and it did not disappoint :)
5/28/23, 10:04 PM
Well Freddy wished to be horny and to have desire arising from his body, and hijacking his thoughts/ taking control of him. I just wished he got a situation where he can be as he is now, when wearing the collar, and Bryant can take off the collar and he can be his larger Tom of Finland self when the collar is off and Bryant wills it.