Recent Comments

anonymous
5/26/23, 6:14 PM
Awesome work, Jack (as ALWAYS!) Admirer of ALL your work, but your Superman stories (esp. when he is humiliated beyond belief) are my FAVES!! Can't wait until the next chapter!!
5/26/23, 6:09 PM
Well paced and fun story!
Lampshade15
5/26/23, 3:13 PM
I've really enjoyed this story! The subject matter really resonated with me and it was wonderfully written as always. Super hot!
5/26/23, 2:24 PM
I really enjoyed the story. Your writing is excellent, and your portrayal of jocks needing to feel superior ( no matter by what means) is spot on. Can't wait to read about reactions and results of Brotein "injections" on the rest of the team...
5/26/23, 1:54 PM
This was a great story! I like stories where the ass hole get what they deserve, and in Rayne's case the pun is very much intended. I admit I already read the story on your website (otherwise I would've commented here on the previous chapters as well). I couldn't wait to finish it. Well done!
5/26/23, 1:35 PM
i really enjoy this story ... and, i am so hopeful that the brotein will make one of the men want to kiss him! ...
Anonymous
5/26/23, 12:08 PM
This story is hot!!! How about a long lost dad find in a club.
5/26/23, 11:22 AM
Thanks for your prompt detailed response. I would hope this great story goes on forever. There are so many options to keep it going.

5/26/23, 11:57 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Aw, thank you! This story is based on a roleplay that I did late last year, so the story is concluded unfortunately. I’ve done a few roleplays over the years and often save them into word documents. They are really epic ta tales, but I never really considered creating longer stories out of them, but with people liking Downfall of an alpha, I may have to look at converting another one into a storymay
Fred
5/26/23, 12:55 AM
For your first story it was really good. Maybe you write a second part with the Tipps you got from the other .

5/26/23, 11:17 AM
@[Fred](/user/show/10005048) This is a one-shot story, maybe a spin off series. I can think of that.