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5/25/23, 10:04 AM
Holy shit! This is so ducking hot! I normally skip musk stories, but the way this is written, I’d cionsider doing it! Especially if it made me an obedient wrestling jock! Love your writing, bro! Please keep it up!
5/25/23, 9:02 AM
Hot start! Excited to see where this goes!
5/24/23, 1:41 PM
Loved the chapter. Personally, I would have added a paragraph or two devoted to the permanent hair removal (my fetish).Your use of words is great and description makes the story feel so real. I expect there might be more.

5/25/23, 8:18 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Sorry bout that man, didn't mean to tease :)
Anonymous
5/25/23, 6:58 AM
wait!!! is superman rock hard wearing panties?????? damn, that's so hot. can't wait for more.
5/25/23, 6:27 AM
Really hot so far. If there is more i look forward to it!
5/25/23, 6:04 AM
Like kgard12 I am finding this story hard to put down. I started it yesterday and have taken every spare moment to read more. The most disappointing aspect of the story is that I've come to the end of the published chapters only to find i will have to wait to spend more time with these amazing characters. This seems like in one day I've become heavily addicted, I fall asleep, and wake up the next morning in rehab having to go cold turkey. It's harsh! I so love this story! I am finding something hot and unexpected around every corner. The pacing is perfect, and in spite of some moral issues with Marcus (it is fiction after all), I love all the characters. Personally I keep experimenting with hypnosis myself to try to decide how effective it really is. Still not quite sure how effective since it seems to make changes so slowly through massive repetition l can't be quite sure at any point exactly where I started. Not so with Marcus's Chrysalis process. I need to try it myself to see if it works as well as it seems. @PuffDeamon Thanks so much for a really enthralling story!
5/25/23, 2:30 AM
aaaaaa its on patreon isnt it

5/25/23, 2:47 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) It's on my blog, actually! I've just been super lazy about crossposting stuff here. xD
Kippers
5/25/23, 1:29 AM
Nice turnaround! I enjoy a good revenge story. I might suggest Kevin humiliating himself with each neighbor's cock, in a spitroast festival of his newly twinked-out slut body. Describe every sexy neighbor and their juicy cock before it slices into Kevin. Have them tell Kevin how much they've always despised him, even as they compliment his twerking pussy and clutching throat. Fuck that cunt until he can't walk, which the neighbors don't really need him to do! 😉
Anonymous
5/25/23, 1:18 AM
Great story!
5/25/23, 1:08 AM
Looking forward to see how this is going to turn out