Recent Comments

5/24/23, 10:09 PM
This is my third time reading the series; it's become one of my go-to's for written erotica! Thank you , my friend!!!
Whitey
5/24/23, 9:25 PM
Wow! This is awesome! Great story. Love your writing style
5/22/23, 8:37 PM
A good beginning, but I'm actually interested in continuing an earlier story of yours if you'll let me?

Willie Cici
5/23/23, 2:46 AM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) Feel free. I can't wait to read it.

5/24/23, 8:35 PM
@Willie Cici Ok, it will be the Knight and Horner story, hopefully I write to your standards.
thiago
5/24/23, 7:37 PM
exelent ...i love this !!!more thong more thong
5/24/23, 6:32 PM
Still eager to read the conclusion to this.
5/24/23, 5:40 PM
I just wanna say I already know this is gonna be great.
5/24/23, 4:40 PM
You need yo keep the story going but Jeremy deserves to have a cock just say 6 inches. I failed to add, Jeremy needs to remain hairless aside from his head as his brother cock slave.
Lavender Lad
5/23/23, 11:40 PM
Very hot though I felt that there were alot of repeated sentences and padding which made me skip around a little. Could definitely use a little trimming down and it would be gold.

5/24/23, 6:07 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thank you. I appreciate every comment to improve my writing!

5/24/23, 1:43 PM
@[FantasyWhispers](/user/show/921620) On the contrary, I find the power of your text in the details you describe. It's a change from one-shots where the construction of the characters and scenes is botched to get to the sex scene immediately. Well done, it's a great job!

5/24/23, 3:10 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you really much. I've read lots of stories. I've always thought that many of them always needed a lot of imagination to immerse fully in the scenery (and very often they are just sex). I decided to start writing stories in which the atmosphere and details, such as bodies or expressions, are the core, to better help the reader's imagination.
5/24/23, 3:03 PM
Nicely written, great concept!
5/24/23, 2:53 PM
To be a kid he needed to lose his body hair & also take a cock in his ass.