Recent Comments

thiago
5/24/23, 7:37 PM
exelent ...i love this !!!more thong more thong
5/24/23, 6:32 PM
Still eager to read the conclusion to this.
5/24/23, 5:40 PM
I just wanna say I already know this is gonna be great.
5/24/23, 4:40 PM
You need yo keep the story going but Jeremy deserves to have a cock just say 6 inches. I failed to add, Jeremy needs to remain hairless aside from his head as his brother cock slave.
Lavender Lad
5/23/23, 11:40 PM
Very hot though I felt that there were alot of repeated sentences and padding which made me skip around a little. Could definitely use a little trimming down and it would be gold.

5/24/23, 6:07 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thank you. I appreciate every comment to improve my writing!

5/24/23, 1:43 PM
@[FantasyWhispers](/user/show/921620) On the contrary, I find the power of your text in the details you describe. It's a change from one-shots where the construction of the characters and scenes is botched to get to the sex scene immediately. Well done, it's a great job!

5/24/23, 3:10 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you really much. I've read lots of stories. I've always thought that many of them always needed a lot of imagination to immerse fully in the scenery (and very often they are just sex). I decided to start writing stories in which the atmosphere and details, such as bodies or expressions, are the core, to better help the reader's imagination.
5/24/23, 3:03 PM
Nicely written, great concept!
5/24/23, 2:53 PM
To be a kid he needed to lose his body hair & also take a cock in his ass.
5/24/23, 12:31 PM
Oh god, this is so hot

5/24/23, 2:32 PM
@[Catcat](/user/show/620382) Thank you:)
Gingcub
5/23/23, 5:59 PM
Fucking incredible! Love the concept and execution. Thoroughly hoping for sequels and more stories from you.

TJ
5/24/23, 2:42 AM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Thank you!! I hope to do some more sequels when I think of more ways to be mean with the concept >:). I have a few other series in mind but none have a finished chapter yet.

Gingcub
5/24/23, 10:00 AM
@TJ I keep coming back to this to reread. I think it’s made me cum 5 times in the last 24 hours.

5/24/23, 2:32 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Wow!! Working hard at it :) glad you enjoyed so much!
5/8/23, 6:14 PM
The next chapter is going to be about Jerod's past year at the college to fill in that gap. It's going to a long chapter and I'm taking my time to try not make it so... predictable. It was a tough choice not to make it its own story but I feel a hefty chapter or two would be more appropriate. It also gives me a break from the current harem but continue building this world at the same time. Not sure on chapter's release, but it will hopefully be this week.

TheOne
5/15/23, 9:16 PM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) A chapter to fill up on the year that Jerod had is definitely a great addition, as there was a huge time skip. Take your time and enjoy :)

5/15/23, 9:43 PM
@[TheOne](/user/show/10018186) Thanks, I was trying to get it out last Friday but I greatly underestimated the task at hand. I want to get this missing chapter just right in terms of sexy funtime and storytelling. I don’t know when it’ll be out but I haven’t stopped working on it.

Anonymous
5/22/23, 3:39 PM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) So when can we expect the new chapter to arrive?

TheOne
5/24/23, 1:14 PM
@[Podoki](/user/show/10019051) Take your time, its definetly gonna be extremely hot! ;)